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holycitygirl

the rivers wide, we'll swim across

Oct 05, 2010 20:05

Title: Here Where I Ran [here where I fall]
Disclaimer: Not mine. Obviously.
Fandom: AI8
Pairing: Kris/Adam
Rating: R, language
Teaser: The way he said it, Adam could feel the words like feedback - reaching out to fill suddenly empty space with a deafening shrill.
A/N: Written for kradamite, slangsty future fic.

( Kris sounds tired, maybe a little bit worried if Adam looks at it with hope-colored glasses. He sounds like what cool water must taste like to sinner's stuck in Hell. )

fic: kradam

Comments 14

mylittlehottie October 5 2010, 21:22:50 UTC

Ahh, would it help kris to know that im ready for him to go back? Please kris?

cookie57 October 5 2010, 23:41:45 UTC

This is wonderful in a heartbreaking kind of way (I firmly believe the universe should always give Adam everything his heart desires). But I'm sitting here anxiously awaiting the "more to come."

mrsfjl66 October 6 2010, 05:42:40 UTC

Whilst thou leave me so unsatisfied?!

And of course I'm kidding. You break my heart, but it's a lyrical gorgeous undoing and oh! You absolutely have the stuff. The magical stuff making words do their work. I adore writer!You. I also adore you!You so I could be biased but...

<3!!!

ggjunkie33 October 8 2010, 21:42:54 UTC

Lovely story, the emotion was so strong my heart aches for them both! Also, you have wonderful descriptive ways of saying things, and I particularly liked the way you said this: What Adam came up with next was razorblades, spit out, leaving a mouth full of blood.. Looking forward to the 'more to come' <3

wikken October 19 2010, 04:51:19 UTC