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[holycitygirl]

Title: We're All Looking (for a happy ending)
Disclaimer: Not mine. Only responsible for their fictional corruption.
Fandom: Lost
Pairing: Jack/Sawyer
Warning: Artsy. Weird.
Summary: He's never made anything easy (even the easy stuff).
A/N: For the great and powerful, Queen zelda_zee, who wanted "happy endings” and/or Sawyer's inner screwed up workings

Comments

[zelda_zee]

Oh, I love this! I love the forward and backward cadence of the parentheses, almost like whispered secret thoughts inserted into the text. And yes, I do love that peek inside Sawyer's head, as always. Lovely writing - and a lovely gift! Thank you so much, hon!

[holycitygirl]

You are most welcome! Glad you liked. I wanted Sawyer and Jack to have a loop, a happy journey (because Lord knows things might never end)

And thank you for giving me motivation to write!

[inthekeyofd]

I'm slowly making my way through the posts, there was a TON of fics posted this luau, but I had to read this one because the minute I clicked on it, I knew it was going to be fantastic, I love love love the way you wrote this, with the back and forth of it, the words and then explinations of them after. It's hard to explain but it was very easy to understand and even better to read.

I do love the way you write and this was exceptional!

[holycitygirl]

Thank you, dear heart. I'm so glad you enjoyed. I wanted this fic to loop a little - be less happy ending and more happy continuation. :)

*hugs*

Have fun catching up with the luau! It was quite a showing this year.

[elise_509]

I love the whole rhythm of this with the parentheses, that back and forth that Z commented on. You do that so so well!

[holycitygirl]

Oh thank you, sweetie!

My tap dance instructor never seemed to think I had much (rhythm that is) - but that was twenty four years ago. Good to know I'm finally getting it right. ;)