Fic: Whoever You Are (Chuck/Awesome, PG)- Can be read as Gen but Slash in later parts

Mar 01, 2010 14:02


Title: Whoever You Are
Fandom: Chuck
Characters/Pairings: Chuck/Awesome
Rating: PG
Warning: Not much. This is preslash but can be read as gen.
Summary: Devon never thought there'd come a day when anything about Chuck would scare him.
Word: 2,307
Spoiler: Season 3 episodes 3, 4 and 6
Disclaimer: Again, i own absolutely nothing.

A/N: Finally beta-read!! ( Read more... )

genre: slash, fanfiction: chuck, fandom: chuck, fanfiction, genre: gen, chuck character: captain awesome, fanfiction: whoever you are, chuck pairing: chuck/awesome

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xenaclone March 1 2010, 08:18:56 UTC
The only teeny fault is that Chuck/Zac has brown eyes. Otherwise this was pitch perfect!

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hollywood_r_bin March 1 2010, 08:34:17 UTC
Whoops! damn, how did that happen?

I think it's smallville messing with my head. It's like most of the cast has green/blue eyes there and i just got used to typing that.

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mysterylady_tx March 1 2010, 10:15:55 UTC
That was GREAT and I really loved the idea of Awesome just being there for him, in that episode I felt so bad for Chuck and was kinda worried about how Dark they *the writers* intend to make him...cause basically I fell in love with the girly-screaming, spastic Chuck...lol

THANKS:"D

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hollywood_r_bin March 1 2010, 12:03:01 UTC
Thanks :) Yeah, that episode was so sad at the end. Had to do something to cheer him up. Honestly Chuck being slightly darker was kind of interesting even if i really love the spastic Chuck too.

Anyway glad you enjoyed it. I finally got reply from my beta, said she'd take a week so i'll be reposting this one and posting my shorter companion piece as well... I plan on having another chapter after that but i don't know how it'd go yet. I'm terrible at updating so it might be a while... that added to the fact that i have 3 other fics i'm also working on as well.

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toffee_and_tea March 1 2010, 13:51:06 UTC
this was absolutely great :)

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hollywood_r_bin March 1 2010, 15:19:05 UTC
Thank you :)

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footielove March 1 2010, 17:55:08 UTC
Oh, how I loved this! :D I really like how you described the different facettes of their relationship, that was great :)

Devon always thought it’d be a cold day in hell before anything in Chuck’s life scared him (creepy co-workers excluded).
Hahahahah yeahh, I'd be scared of Jeffster too ;D

Just one tiny grammar mistake: ...filling him up with something that shouldn’t be there and he so desperately want to let it out of him...
it should be wants :)

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hollywood_r_bin March 1 2010, 18:48:56 UTC
Thanks for noticing :) I always suck at grammar stuff. When I write I write by instinct, generally unaware of grammar rules... I didn't even know what an infinitive was until I recently started learning Russian.

And yeah, i think the Chuck/Devon relationship is really unexplored, which is too bad cause i think there's a lot to it now that Devon knows at least part of Chuck's secret.

And lol yeah... Jeffster, both very strangely interesting/intrigueing and horrifying at the same time hehehe. I love them! I especially loved them at comiccon when the actors sang Fat Bottom Girl.

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footielove March 1 2010, 19:02:46 UTC
Well I didn't notice any other grammar mistakes (aside from a couple of commas, but whatever lol) so you did a good job :)

That's true, but at least he gets a bit more screentime now! I love how they originally planned the Captain as a side character that only has 2 or 3 appearances throughout the whole first season, but then the fans loved him and now we seem to see more and more of him each episode :) It's great! I didn't even like him at first, and now he's one of my favs :D

Jeffster rock!! I love that comicon video, they all act like freaking rockstars, hahah. And Vik Sahay's voice is great! Jeffster should totally make an album, I'd buy it.
(Jeffster icon for emphasis :P)

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hollywood_r_bin March 2 2010, 09:42:54 UTC
Lol right. Well thanks.

Yeah i heard Awesome was supposed to be a bad guy. I'm glad they kept him around like the cute blonde too perfect puppy he is. And that he's also more involved now that he knows the secret.

Anyway Awesome is really the opposite of the type of guys i usually like, but i do find him really really endearing even if i'm not attracted to him.

I know! Jeffster rocks! hehe

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untherapy March 1 2010, 21:00:47 UTC
wow, this is really sweet. I personally don't even see it as pre-slash, just some good old character study and family h/c :) very very poignant

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hollywood_r_bin March 2 2010, 09:44:19 UTC
Oh, well just this chapter is not exactly preslash but in the companion piece and possible sequel it will be so i put it down as preslash

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