Comments | hollyrose_hime: I’ll Be Praying For You

hollyrose_hime

I’ll Be Praying For You

Aug 16, 2009 02:19

I’ll Be Praying For You [FF.NET]
Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the characters from Axis Powers Hetalia

Summary: India visits, as she does every year. England struggles to understand why.

( Setting aside his already read newspaper, Arthur rose from his armchair to answer the door. He was not particularly surprised by his visitor’s identity; she usually paid him a visit at this time of year… )

fanfiction, c:england, f:hetalia, oc! india

Comments 13

kuro_ko August 16 2009, 02:15:21 UTC

I've learned alot from this thank you for writing it ^_^
I hope to see more fics from you!

hollyrose_hime August 18 2009, 17:39:42 UTC

I'm glad that you liked it! =D
Hopefully I should have more on the way, it just depends on how slow I am at finishing them ^^'

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hollyrose_hime August 18 2009, 18:20:58 UTC

Thank you! ^^
Yeah, me too - I hope he makes a character for India soon... I'm curious about how he/she will turn out =D

yamiyoru August 16 2009, 03:04:03 UTC

it's written beautifully. XD

hollyrose_hime August 18 2009, 18:23:29 UTC

Thank you!!! You just made my day! *glows* XD

yamiyoru August 19 2009, 01:38:31 UTC

lol. i am most honored to

nitemptation August 16 2009, 04:07:37 UTC

great fic! I love your India. ^__^

hollyrose_hime August 18 2009, 18:24:59 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you like her =D

whitewings9 August 20 2009, 18:33:52 UTC

Wow, this was so interesting the way you incorporated the tradition with the nations - did Russia really favour India over the Indo-China War?! ...what happened in the Indo-China War? (you've started me off on a new reasearch spree now)

Arthur was wonderfully portrayed, I can see his regret. And it's just amazing how much you've incorporated into the fic. *hugs* Please write more about India~

hollyrose_hime August 20 2009, 19:42:14 UTC

Hehe I'm glad it was =D Since you're going to look it up anyway, I won't spoil it for you (or more accurately, I can't be bothered to type it at the moment XD), but apparently it's true ^^
*hugs back* I was a little unsure whether Arthur was alright or not since he didn't really seem to be doing anything that counted as very British apart from drink tea, but I thought anything else would seem to deliberate and unnatural.

I'll try to think of some more, but it probably won't be for a while - I'm trying not to start too many more things till I'm done with your Russia one ^^' (Not that that's really worked so far, but one can hope...)