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Winds of Change Chapter 20

Mar 23, 2013 14:36

Title: Winds of Change (20/?)

Chapter 20

Pairing: Jane/Maura

Rating: M

Disclaimer: I don’t own Jane or Maura or their counterparts from the TV show or books…I only wish. I am going to be adding a few of my own characters however.

Summary: Our couple gets their first real experiences in the world of Undrehiel and meet a few new people and creatures. ( Read more... )

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Comments 4

awayfan March 24 2013, 01:40:09 UTC

Great update. I love how you write the descriptions of the places & things that are around them. It opens my mind to really think of the what they are seeing.

So glad to hear from you again! hollyhwrites March 31 2013, 03:45:40 UTC

It makes my day that you are sticking with my story and enjoying it. I hope to have the next chapter up sometime tomorrow if I can but if not it will be Monday for sure. I only need to read it over and try and catch a few editing problems. I hope to be hearing from you again soon. Happy Easter!

afret2010 March 24 2013, 02:47:54 UTC

I love the description of the Raven's Lady. How do I book passage on that ship?

The incident with the troll was interesting. I was wondering what if any creature in Undrehiel would be able to resist the force of their will. Will be learning what it is abo it the trolls that make them resistant to the force of will?

Happy to hear from you! hollyhwrites March 31 2013, 03:53:23 UTC

I hoped I was able to describe what I was seeing in my head well enough for everyone. I would love to take a trip on the Raven's Lady. Even better if I was there as the Raven's Lady. LOL or Snow's Warrior. I am not picky. ;-D The next chapter is almost ready to post, just needs a quick going over to try and catch some of the typos. I try but I never catch them all. Again, many thanks for your continued reviews. I hope your enjoyment of my story follows through to the end. Have a Happy Easter!