Simple Design

[hollow_strife]

Title: Simple Design
Author: LoveAngel2141
Beta Credit: torncorpse
Characters: Zack Fair & Cloud Strife
Written For: 12_Stories - Eight - Miscellaneous B - Duty
Word Count: 1,629
Rating: PG-13
Summary: He dealt with the heart ache of loss the same way he dealt with everything. He took it, pulled it deep inside of him and buried it. Buried it so deep that no one would ever be

Comments

[mako_pretty]

Oh god hunny!
*wails*
I declare today Angst day, and will wallow in it, poor Cloud and Zack!
*sniffles*
This is sad, good, and well written hun.

[hollow_strife]

Yes I agree, today should offically be angst day.

Thank you sweetie! I'm so glad you enojyed it! And thank you, I was doubting this so much. I guess maybe we can never see how good our work really is.

[mako_pretty]

I love your work, so that must be it.

[kaia_hitomi]

Very, very well written!
I really loved it, wonderful job.
I wish I could write like that, lolz I could never think of anything even if I wanted to haahaa.
Very very wonderful!!

[hollow_strife]

Oh thank you sweetie! You made me blush so hard at that! I was really doubting this entire peace, but you just made me feel so much better about it! Really, thank you so much.

[kaia_hitomi]

You're very welcome. Everything I said was ture.
Absolutly wonderful.

[rainbowserenity]

Awwww T_T
That was surprisingly sad. D: OH ZACK. OH CLOUD. a;lskf ♥
What I really liked about this was how you wrote it. :3 It was vague enough so that it left you wondering, but you could still understand what it was all about...if that makes sense. xD And I like how you didn't use their names. It just added to the awesome totally-works vague feeling. *nodnod*

OH THEM. *wibble* ♥

[hollow_strife]

I'm glad you liked it sweetie, because I was cursing your name so loud yesterday. Remmeber that whole "You should write about Riku and Sora?" thing. Yeah, it's like the fic that wouldn't die. Just to let you know.

But thank you about the the story hon. I find the entire thing weird, at least for what I usually write, and have pretty much been waiting to get shot or something.

And I struggled with not using their names. It's kind of hard not to, but I'm glad it added to the whole feeling.

*Huggles you* No wibbles. I promise, I'll something super happy for them soon to make up for all the angst I've been putting them through lately.

[rainbowserenity]

Ahaha, really? xD Well hey, it's a good thing! KH NEEDS MOAR RIKU/SORA, MOOHAHAHA. >3 I have way too many fics that won't die. a;lskf

It is weird, but a good kind of a weird! xD; Everyone needs a fic like this, mwhahaha. ;D I know I've got one or two up my sleeve. And it is really difficult not to use names, rawr. @_@ NAMES ARE LIKE....LIFEBLOOD. Or something. *flailded*

Huzzah! I'll be looking forward to super-happiness! :3
And meep meep, I still want to comment on those music meme drabbles you did. *flail* Stupid work, making me all tired and not wanting to stare at the computer. BUT YAY FOR DAYS OFF TOMORROW, MWHAHAHAHA. I SHALL CATCH UP ON FICS LYKE WHOA \o/
Ahem. I'm rambling. xD ♥

[hollow_strife]

Yes! over 11,000 words later and I finally managed to rid myself of it. And I don't even think it's that good. For some reason you also made me feel the need to write porn for them, which yeah, I'm not good at.

Exucse me, I hate my own pron writing, everyone else seems to love it.

Hon, if I didn't force my self to write about happy things most of the time, all I would ever write is painful ansgt. But I would very much like to see what you come up with. I'm also waiting for you to get over your fear of it and write teh porns.

Work can suck sometimes. Believe me I know. And no worries hon, take your time. There still going to be there when you get around to them.

Rambling is good. I do it constantly. Mostly when I'm tired.

[fantasia0829]

Argh, emotional suicide! ;_; Zack's too stubborn!

[bumbisex]

This was amazing, oh shit... you made me cry, you bastard! ;_;
It's spot on... everything, the language used, the emotions. It all fits so well. It's... heartbreaking! xD
And I agree to the angst day thingie. *gives cookie*

Damn. I need ice cream. *sobs*

[hollow_strife]

Aw! I'm sorry for having made you cry hon! I really need mean to! But thank you for reading and thank you so much for the kind words.

I needed ice cream after writing it! :)