Shattering Illusions

[hollow_strife]

Title: Shattering Illusions
Author: LoveAngel2141
Beta Credit: torncorpse
Characters: Zack Fair, Angeal Hewley
Written For: 10_themes - Prompt Table Two - Anger
Word Count: 592
Rating: PG - 13
Summary: All of the pent of frustrations of being treated as nothing more then a child. Of being treated as though he were nothing more then an insignificant fool. He was more then that

Comments

[_greatguitarsex]

Okay, I really loved every bit of this story because I oculd picture it like a movie in my head. That last line was perfect, and I really loved this one too:

The feelings of accomplishment for the destruction that he had created. The things he had ruined littered around his feet, like medals of honor.

After all of the havoc in the first few paragraphs putting that in there just made it breathtaking.

[hollow_strife]

Thank you sweetie. I think what compelled me to write it is because I'm that way. When I get mad enough I just want to destroy things. It's not something I allow myself to indulge in very often, because I hate ruining things that I've paid good money for, or that I really honestly love, but sometimes I just can't help myself. And when I'm done I always feel kind of accomplished because I actually did something about my angry. It's kind of weird actually. But thank you babe, I'm glad you liked this one as well!

[loxetta]

I love it. I think my favorite part is that, to me, the action Zack chose really just shows how much growing up he still has yet to do.

[hollow_strife]

Thank you! I think, no matter how old or grown up we are, sometimes we just want to destroy something, you know what I mean? but I feel you on what your saying about the total destruction being a sign that he still has a lot of learning and growing to do.

[mako_pretty]

This is so angry, but good. Despite how mature he wants to be seen, he's still kind of throwing a fit, and that's rather childish, but believable of Zack! The need to destroy and have pain is a sign of the need to feel in control, and I understand it as well, and I applaud you for writing this. I loved this one hun, it's so complex!

[hollow_strife]

Thank you sweetie *Blushes* Seriously I don't even know where half of this stuff comes from. I wish I did, because then it would probably be a hell of alot easier to write the rest of the time. But thank you so so much!