Wounded Emotions

[hollow_strife]

Title: Wounded Emotions
Author: LoveAngel2141
Beta Credit: torncorpse
Characters: Zack Fair, Cloud Strife and Aerith Gainsborough
Written For: 10_themes - Prompt Table Two - Fear
Word Count: 1,273
Rating: PG - 13
Summary: He had fooled himself into thinking that this was the only way. Avoiding her until she finally got fed up with it and decided he wasn't worth the time and

Comments

[tigerlofu]

you know, this made he sit here with a lump in my throat and a desire to go hug my girlfriend and make sure she is there. I guess that is good, means you conveyed the emotions well

[hollow_strife]

Aw! I'm sorry if it made you sad. But I'm glad that I was able to convey the emotions that well. Thank you very much for reading!

[tigerlofu]

Yeah, I really liked that story. One particular line I liked was Cloud's needing to hurt as much as he was hurting. Very lovely detail

[hollow_strife]

Aw thank you sweetie! Yeah, that was probably my favorite line as well. But really, thank you for the complimnt. I was really proud of this!

[fantasia0829]

Hmm hmm, that was a good read. I'm not sure how to feel towards Zack, though. Half of me wants to pat him and say, "I know it's not easy to do this", and the other half of me wants to punch him and yell, "You can't drag this on forever!"

Erm, yeah. ^_^;;

[hollow_strife]

Thank you. Yeah I know what you mean. I kind of wanted to yell at him "Just get over it!" The entire time I was writing it.

[mako_pretty]

I have to agree with this comment, 100%.

[rainbowserenity]

Oh Zaaack. T____T

You know, it was actually kind of refreshing to read something like this. Mostly they're all, "AERITH WAS OKAY WITH ZACK BEING GAY FOR CLOUD AND THEY ALL LIVED HAPPILY EVER AFTER. :D" Which I /definitely/ don't mind (that's how it should go, really >3), but having Zack and Cloud all turmoiled and Aerith so convinced that Zack's totally straight is a different way to look at everything. Oh them.

AND THEN CLOUD THINKING ZACK CHOSE AERITH OVER HIM, OMG. *sobs* Cloud, get a clue! Zack loves /you/! ;____;
Oh man. This was so heartbreaking, but still a great fic. grlaklkz Clack. ♥

[hollow_strife]

First off oh man your icon. That boy makes the best confused / wounded puppy dog/ confused looks ever.

I think that's probably what compelled me to write it. I know I would not be that willing to give up Zack that easily. I would be like "He's mine bitch! Get the hell off of him!"

And we all know there is no way that Zack could be totally straight with all of those beautiful mean around. I mean come on! I know I personally would do most of them. Well maybe not Sephiroth. That might be kind of freaky. He'd probably end up *shudders* Y'know, I'm not even really sure I want to picture that. I'll just leave him to Genesis. Who I would probably also refuse to sleep with on the principle that I would keep seeing Gackt instead of him.

Well we know that Zack loves Cloud, but I still have a feeling that I'm going to have to write something extra happy to make up for breaking both of their hearts into little itty bitty pieces.

Aw thank you sweetie. And Yes Clack. I still love that couple name so much.

[torncorpse]

you know that i love this totally, but for some reason you are being a mean spirited biatch and i gotta do this.

so yar, me likes. it's really nice and fun and angsty at the same time - i don't know why it think it's fun but i do.

can you tell that i don't have much to say???

[hollow_strife]

I don't have any idea why you thinks is funny either.

Yes I can tell you don't have much say.

[_greatguitarsex]

This was written really nicely because I could seriously feel Zack's struggle. The phone conversation had me cringing with him and laugh at different parts too. Very well done, Jess!

[hollow_strife]

Thank you sweetie! I guess i'm glad I could make you cringe, as bad as that sounds! LOL