Darkness Consumes

[hollow_strife]

Title: Darkness Consumes.
Author: LoveAngel2141
Characters: Zack Fair
Written For: 10_themes Prompt Table Two - Depression
Word Count: 1,039
Rating: PG
Summary: The small room that had been allotted to him by the company he served had become much more then just a bedroom. It had become a prison.
Disclaimer: I in no way own or am affiliated in anyway with SquareEnix,

Comments

[torncorpse]

That's lovely. And beautiful and oh so tormenting.

I think because this is all like internal, having no dialogue, it makes it that much stronger.
You should be proud darling, well done.

^_^
[I am also very proud that you put this in comms. ^_^]

[hollow_strife]

Thank you sweetie! Now that I've posted in them I feel like an iodit for it, but I guess I'm kind of gonna have to get over it aren't I?

Thank you sweetie! You know your opinion means alot to me rigt?

[torncorpse]

lol, icon twin.

well i think you did wonderful.
don't worry about other people!!

just love yourself.

[hollow_strife]

Yes we are icon twins. Aren't we lucky? And you still owe me smut.

I'm just not in a good mood today sweetie, other wise I would probably wouldn't be feeling like this.

[bouncywild]

He would go and find his best friend.

He would go and find his light.

Gorgeous! You have no idea how happy it makes me to read Zack saying Cloud is his light. I like to hope/pretend Zack's the light Cloud is looking for in Kingdom Hearts. *sap*

But this is beautiful. You should be proud. :)

[hollow_strife]

Thank you sweetie! I have to admit that I'm the same way. I like to think that Cloud is searching for Zack in Kingdom Hearts. So I guess that makes me a sap as well :)

Thank you again! I'm happy you liked it!

[rainbowserenity]

Awww, Zack. a;lskjfoij

The end of this fic took the thought right out of my brain - about how Cloud is Zack's light; how he needs him after Angeal's death, because just dude. ♥

Looooved this. ♥

[hollow_strife]

Thank you sweetie! I've always thought that Zack and Cloud were each others light, and that they needed each other.

I'm glad you liked it! :)

[rainbowserenity]

So true. ♥ That's one of the reason I love them so much, really. They came into each other's lives when they needed each other most. ♥

OH CLACK, YOU OWN ME. *flail*
:3

[hollow_strife]

I love that couple name by the way,. Clack. It totally fits them to.

They did. Cloud needed Zack to protect him and Zack needed Cloud to show him that there was still light and happiness in the world.

I'm still royally pissed that they had to break up the greatest and most canon couple in the entire game.

[kaia_hitomi]

Wow. very lovely! I love the last line. Very well done! As others have said, you should be proud!
Amazing! <3

[hollow_strife]

Thank you hon! You know the weird thing is I'm not even sure where it came from? It just kind of poured out once I started!

[kaia_hitomi]

Well I think it was great! <3 Good job!

[may_m]

I really liked the idea, and true- there is a lot of power in self reflective fanfiction.
I think a proof-read would've made this piece perfect, though.

Cheers, keep up the good work. =)
M.S.

[hollow_strife]

Thank you for reading and thank you the advice as well!