Worry, Escape, Relief

[hollie_1201]

Title: Worry, Escape, Relief
Author: Hollie_1201
Pairing: Jennifer Hartmann & Emma Muller (Hand aufs Herz)
Rating: G
Summary: Three word challenge - Jenny in different situations.   
Word Count: 832
Disclaimer: I don't own anything.  All characters belong to Sat1. 
Authors Note: Please comment.  I know I haven't written anything Jemma centric in over a

Comments

[ptcruz]

Very nice. Very suspenseful. Showing her still inner struggle with drugs...the pull they still have on her. Her strength to fight it, and get to the person who can always comfort her.

[hollie_1201]

Thanks for the comment, hun :) I was hoping to show that, and I'm glad it came across like it.

[anonymous]

love love love it soo good. ~Carley

[hollie_1201]

Thanks :)

[ext_1107917]

This is great Hollie!!! Wroth the wait for a nice update of Jemma after the attack and all that happened, what was on Jenny's mind and she still fighting hard and finding the peace in her love!! I wish you keep writing it, but it's ok if you write other stories, I am sure they all great for reading!!! Thanks!

[hollie_1201]

Thanks for the comment, glad you liked it :)

[mel_datsme]

suspenseful -- i liked the anxiety of the chase. kept me on the edge of my seat. jenny's fight with outer and inner demons. very nicely done. i laughed out loud at "A thudding sound echoes and roars of laughter fill the empty night" -- i knew instantly what happened since jenny evaded the pole just moments before. And this jenny -- so athletic...well i guess she was on the VB team...but scaling and walking along fences? climbing trees? crawling in windows? seems like an everyday thing for her. over all, nicely done! short, concise, but very picturesque and complete. you write angst, suspense, nervousness, fear very well! thank you!