With Me

Oct 27, 2011 15:58

Title: With Me
Author: Hollie_1201
Pairing: Jenny Hartmann (Hand aufs Herz)
Rating: PG
Summary: Jenny has a nightmare and finds something she will cherish forever.
Word Count: 835
Disclaimer: I own nothing.
Authors Note: Please comment, your comments do mean a lot to me, even if they are short.

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I look out the window as the city of Cologne gets smaller ( Read more... )

hand aufs herz, jenny hartmann, jemma

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omg ptcruz October 27 2011, 05:10:57 UTC
So sad, touching, and beautiful. Such love from parents to daughter. Wonderful.

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irhotshit October 27 2011, 05:13:38 UTC
wow... WOOOOOW ............WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW,
this is .. WOW, amazing, excellent and all that.
i love it
did i mention WOW
-worships-

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ext_749987 October 27 2011, 05:47:35 UTC
i really felt this as i have experienced people passing unexpectedly. a lot of times, there is a need for them to reassure us, the ones left behind, that they're okay and that we're okay, even with out them.

for jenny, this dream was that reassurance for her and i think also a bit of a coming-to-terms with the fact that they're really gone, gone from this physical plane but not gone from her heart.

for some reason or other, i really liked this description in her dream that describes the passing from physical to beyond: "I look down to where our hands interlock, her hand looks transparent against mine, I can see my own hand underneath." it seems that within her dream, this is the moment of realization that her parents have left.

bittersweet and touching. thanks again for sharing.

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costex20 October 27 2011, 13:47:18 UTC
Another excelent fiction Hollie, please keep writing these! ;)

So sad but sweet at the same time... LOve it Love it

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lazerbug2006 October 27 2011, 14:21:33 UTC
I literally got cold chills with one. So much love there~

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