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Customer Appreciation

Apr 04, 2011 23:23

Title: Customer Appreciation
Author: mechante_fille
Rating: NC-17
Fandom: Original
Wordcount: 1184
Warnings: poly

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Comments 16

moonriddler_mim July 18 2011, 08:36:55 UTC

why does that never happen to me? *cough*

that was so good. heee! I bet they drove just a liiiittle to fast getting home. ^^

mechante_fille July 19 2011, 00:58:17 UTC

*grins* Well, there was that one motorcycle store guy.

It could be that there was some speeding taht day. ^_^ I'm glad you enjoyed!

charisstoma July 19 2011, 02:22:45 UTC

I.. I.. ooooooh. *panting here* This wasn't even the Day of Porn entry. I'm going to die a small death.
Excellent 3-some.

mechante_fille July 20 2011, 19:35:58 UTC

*grins* Thanks!!

newtypeshadow August 5 2011, 06:21:50 UTC

Hot damn I love you so much right now. That was smokin hot, and I had to MAKE myself tell you so instead of rushing off to "Saturday Morning" because I must have more of these three RIGHT NOW OMFG!!!

I love the situation, the way Denis is totally open with his boyfriend Scott, and how Scott is such a top even through the phone (which, great way of separating the voices, by the by--I never got confused, it was great!), and how Greg totally went for it--first with his invitation to Denis, then with Denis and Scott's invitation for him.

♥♥♥

mechante_fille August 29 2011, 00:16:58 UTC

Thank you so much for commenting on both stories!!

I'm thinking I maybe should have used carets to set of Scott's voice, instead... but I'm glad it worked.

I like that they are secure enough in their relationship to grab opportunities as they, ahem, come up. But that their first thought (or among the top 10) is to share, not hide. *pets them*