Maybe Next Time

[cinniwalls]

Title: Maybe next time
Author: Cinniwalls
Rating: Probably PG
Fandom: Original
Pairing: Cole/ Adonis
Wordcount:1,859
Warnings: urm, slash but no smut

So, when I heard about this challenge I decided that instead of waiting for everyone eles to post I'd actually participate. This story is about getting over the jerk from your past told from anothers point

Comments

[mechante_fille]

Oh, that was sweet! I'm so glad you decided to write. ^_^ Jadyn sounds adorable. Heh, it is easy to dream about maybe doing something wild on the way home in the safety of your brother's car.

[marasmine]

Is there something supernatural going on there? Or is it just in my head? I enjoyed that peek into their lives but I'm not sure Jadyn should keep that card!

[shiruartist]

Love ♥ ^^
I feel the need to say that when creepy silver-eyed guy came onto Jadyn my mind specifically went to THREESOME. And then it was awesome when creepy silver-eyed guy propositioned him for a threesome. ^___^ Except for the creepy part.

I love this story. Just- how nervous Cole is and how he's afraid that he made the whole thing up and then how they end up making out.
^^
And I love the Jadyn side-story because it's just like a little something extra that's absolutely delicious. AND THE GUARD. AWESOME. :)
Jadyn could form his own harem! XD

[tygati]

Ahaha. Awesome. And totally in need of a sequel. Gotta delve into the story of Dr. Gael Eden's creepy eyes, and find out who the guard is, and see if Adonis and Cole manage to devolve into public indecency... ^.~

[skylark97]

I love the brother solidarity and that they're all there for Cole and to make sure that Cole doesn't get another bad experience with this guy. I'm intrigued with the guard and his Jadyn watching and want to read more about him. XD

Awesome! *glomps*