The Proper-False (Part three, PG-13, 1465 words)

Jul 17, 2011 15:34

Title: The Proper-False
Author: lilian_cho
Rating: PG-13
Fandom: Original
Pairing: future Adrien/Nicholas
Wordcount: 1465
Warnings: Harlequinesque plot. MOAR Pretty Women references and Chinese jokes.
A/N: Answers holidaysmut's Boss and embrace your Geekness challenges and writing_game's prompts: genetic, silly & ramble ( Read more... )

geek, boss/employee exchange, boss

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jayanx July 18 2011, 00:07:37 UTC
Nicholas's sense of humor never fails to make me smile, and reminds me a bit of my own family. I can't wait until he meets Adrien's family and we see how well their story holds.

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lilian_cho July 31 2011, 22:49:21 UTC
Thank you =D Your family sounds fun *g*

I'll...uh...have him meet Adrien's family once they land at JFK airport. Right now they're not even physically inside Adrien's bedroom yet. *headdesk*

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lilian_cho August 1 2011, 01:18:29 UTC
Should probably link to the entry instead of the cut tag. (Tiny bonuses on top)

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mechante_fille July 18 2011, 01:03:16 UTC
Cute! Nicholas's sens of humor and Adrien's reactions to it keep it from being the creepy you've mentioned it could be. I love how Nicholas is throwing himself into his role... and helping create it, too. ^_^

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lilian_cho July 31 2011, 22:53:48 UTC
Yay, glad you like =D Thanks for reading and commenting.

Part Four. The T-shirt thing could've been creepy, I suppose, if the suggestion had not come from who it came from.

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charisstoma July 22 2011, 19:52:11 UTC
Thank you so much for the reminder. I would have missed this otherwise. Loved the humor here and I notice that Adrien gives as good as he gets. You stopped before getting to the bedroom tour *smiles* but I noticed the sensual side of Adrien, not just shoes but socks off when he walks into his home and the brush of his hand on the leather sofa.

I have a perverted mind, this line,"“So here’s the receiving area slash living room," made the hamster on his wheel go around. *grins*
Not "madly" in love? But he didn't discount love and I am beginning to think that it's not the former lover Adrien's referencing here.

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lilian_cho July 31 2011, 22:52:00 UTC
Yw =) Thanks for reading and commenting, as always!

Ahaha, right now they're not even physically inside Adrien's bedroom yet ^^;;
And even when they're in the bedroom there won't be sexytiems...

lol, at least it's still better than receiving area-cum-living room? I think people used to (or do they still?) talk that way, right?

;-)

Glad you enjoyed.

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