Comments | holidayonice: HP: Catharsis (Pansy/Millicent, PG-13)

holidayonice

HP: Catharsis (Pansy/Millicent, PG-13)

Jul 13, 2006 10:29

Title: Catharsis
Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairing: Pansy/Millicent
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 620

Summary: Pansy is left alone in her seventh year when Draco doesn’t come back.

( Catharsis )

millicent bulstrode, pansy parkinson, femmeslash, pansy/millicent

Comments 12

jaxinthebox July 13 2006, 14:12:14 UTC

Oh wow. You words really brought it too life. <3

holidayonice July 15 2006, 15:57:00 UTC

Thank you! :)

animimares July 13 2006, 15:02:17 UTC

Wow. I must admit this was... breathtaking. No, not breathtaking. It was stunning. Is. I don't even know what to say. I haven't read girlslash for a long time, been buried in HD all over the place, but this... this awoke my love for the girl/girl. And Pansy/Millicent isn't even my thing AT ALL, but your Pansy is so amazingly IC and Millicent is everything Millicent should be. Your style of writing is without doubt one of the best I've met. In so few words you tell everything that needs to be told. The backstory and the description of the situation at Hogwarts is perfect, just like Pansy's sarcastic attitude towards it. Her care for Draco is so sweet that it breaks my heart. Thank you, thank you, thank you. This is just what I needed.

~ animimares

PS. Do I need to tell you it's going to my memories?

holidayonice July 15 2006, 16:00:02 UTC

*blushes* Thank you so much for such a lovely review! I didn't think Pansy/Millicent was my thing either, but this fic was begging to be written. I'm quite fond of these girls now. :)

(Of course you need to tell me it's going in your memories! :D How else would I know?)

rinsbane July 13 2006, 22:21:30 UTC

This is great. Millicent is so there, in just a few words. And the atmosphere is tangible, the consequences of Snape's act to the Slytherins. Love it.

holidayonice July 15 2006, 16:09:02 UTC

Thanks! The fic is about Pansy, of course, but I really wanted to get across a sense of who Millicent is - her masculinity but also the underlying strength of character - so I'm glad you think I achieved that. :)

redcandle17 July 13 2006, 23:56:44 UTC

That's just wonderful. I loved Pansy's isolation from the rest of the school and I especially loved her fantasies about hanging out with the (other) Death Eater wives.

holidayonice July 15 2006, 16:04:55 UTC

What else does the poor girl have to look forward to? Thanks for commenting!

zeft July 14 2006, 04:34:17 UTC

That was brilliant. Millicent was right on.

holidayonice July 15 2006, 16:04:19 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you think so. :)