Comments | holiday_on_ice: Gift for <strong class="lj-user"><a href="/read/user/albiondreams">albiondreams</a></strong>!

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Gift for albiondreams!

Dec 31, 2007 13:50

Title: [Untitled]
Recipient: albiondreams
Main pairing: Evgeny Plushenko/Brian Joubert
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I swear it's all lies, only lies and nothing but lies.

( Something was not right. )

brian/evgeni, albiondreams, gifts, evgeni, brian

Comments 2

albiondreams January 1 2008, 21:46:30 UTC

Awww I love you so much right now for writing my OTP! Haha Brian was so confused throughout the whole story and I'm not blaming him, it all felt rather surreal and dream like, almost eerie at the beginning. I love this beautiful sleepy atmosphere you created, of Moscow in the early morning, in between night and day, cold air and gleamy lights. The meeting - well, at first I thought it was rather sad and melancholy, but it's not really, is it? Am I right thinking Evgeni got what (or better whom) he wanted in the end? I can't say I'm entirely sure who the other is, but I'm really betting on Alexei, at least I kept imagining it was him during the conversation. Lol and now I'm gonna look like an idiot if it's not. Or is it Stéphane? Anyway, I liked how Evgeni was enjoying Brian's confusion and kind of using it to his advantage. The kiss was sexy and very teasing in a way, one of those kisses intended to show what more there could be that you'll never get. And it was both hot and tender and let's just say I liked it A LOT.

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carioca January 30 2008, 08:08:19 UTC

Sorry it took me so long to get back to you. :) Thanks for the nice comment, it means a lot to me (especially it's the first story I wrote in about a year and a half). And I'm glad you liked it. ;)

Am I right thinking Evgeni got what (or better whom) he wanted in the end? I can't say I'm entirely sure who the other is, but I'm really betting on Alexei, at least I kept imagining it was him during the conversation.

Yes, both assumptions were right (and I'm glad that I made it clear enough, I was afraid I was being too complex *gg*). By the other person I did mean Alexei, and Evgeny really did get whom he wanted in the end... but then, he always gets his way, doesn't he. :) To tell you the secre, this Brin/Alexei/Evgeny love triangle is one of my fave playgrounds. ;) I think it has great potential. ;)

Thank you again for reading and enjoying the story, it was a great pleasure to write it. :)