Reading this was my prize for finishing all the moderating, and I could not have had a better reward. I read the first line while I was formatting, and I nearly fell out of my chair, because what a way to start a story that plays to all my kinksSeriously, I love this so much. It's the perfect fantasy future, with Johnny beating Evan at skating and at life, and all the friendships and alliances around them changing and growing up. I really love your Ben, mature and nonchalant about everything but also really uncertain, taking things as they come but not sure he wants to take them. So the laid-back attitude becomes a way of defending himself. And your flirty, funny, world-weary Johnny, pretending he isn't trying to take over the world. He gets what he wants
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I was so relieved to read your comment. Writing for the person who basically invented your OTP is a bit daunting. In my world Johnny always gets what he wants especially when it's Ben. I liked the idea of them being at a point where a relationship was a possiblily and letting them make the choice to be together. And for some reason an unconvential seduction seemed to suit them. I'm very glad you liked you gift!
I'm glad you liked the story. Both Ben and I apologize for the Norwegian comment. In Ben's defense he was flustered and picked the first country he thought of regardless of English skills. In the author's defence Norwegian athletes tend to be hot and when I think of winter sports I think of Norway so I did assume they had a bobsled team. We promise to do better in the future;)
Um...guh. Yeah, not a lot of coherence available after that sex scene.
I loved it. Like Mosca said, great backstory about the changes in their social circles and circumstances. Amusing that Ben was so very pissed off about Evan. Johnny hooking up while fitting a guy for a costume seems to be a holiday_on_ice theme, but hey it works so very well as foreplay, so I'm not complaining.
We're all just looking for ways to get Johnny on his knees! I'm so glad you liked the story. I wanted to build a believable friendship for Ben and Johnny and it took some work to get them there. Thank you for reading!
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Reading this was my prize for finishing all the moderating, and I could not have had a better reward. I read the first line while I was formatting, and I nearly fell out of my chair, because what a way to start a story that plays to all my kinksSeriously, I love this so much. It's the perfect fantasy future, with Johnny beating Evan at skating and at life, and all the friendships and alliances around them changing and growing up. I really love your Ben, mature and nonchalant about everything but also really uncertain, taking things as they come but not sure he wants to take them. So the laid-back attitude becomes a way of defending himself. And your flirty, funny, world-weary Johnny, pretending he isn't trying to take over the world. He gets what he wants ( ... )
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I loved it. Like Mosca said, great backstory about the changes in their social circles and circumstances. Amusing that Ben was so very pissed off about Evan. Johnny hooking up while fitting a guy for a costume seems to be a holiday_on_ice theme, but hey it works so very well as foreplay, so I'm not complaining.
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