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Chromatics

Jun 14, 2009 04:43

Title: Chromatics
Rating: PG-13
Challenge: For the Spectrum Challenge at

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jack, flashfic, gwen, toshiko, rhys, owen, fic, ianto, torchwood

Comments 24

misswinterhill June 14 2009, 13:04:09 UTC

This was a really enjoyable read and a fabulous idea. I loved the concept of using the colours to define different points in the life of Ianto - very lovely and original interpretation of the prompt.

holdingoff June 14 2009, 20:49:05 UTC

Thanks. I was really confounded by the prompt, but this finally came to mind. It may not exactly be along the lines for what they had in mind, but it's the best I could come up with.

teachwriteslash June 14 2009, 13:17:00 UTC

OMG - the imagery is wonderful. I loved the Rugby scene. Devious Ianto with Owen rocks.... but that last bit ....................ARGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

holdingoff June 14 2009, 20:50:47 UTC

The Rugby bit was kinda fun, and any time Ianto can leave Owen spluttering is good.

Last one. That was hard, but necessary.

hab318princess June 14 2009, 13:43:05 UTC

loved them but the last one was heartbreaking, great vignettes

holdingoff June 14 2009, 20:52:08 UTC

Yeah, the last one was a bit painful; which is why they were listed in reverse. It was a difficult prompt.

luvinthe88and20 June 14 2009, 14:06:30 UTC

Lovely job on all these.

holdingoff June 14 2009, 20:52:19 UTC

Thanks muchly.

bookwrm89 June 14 2009, 16:46:01 UTC

I loved this! Tosh being a total Janto fangirl (and Jack & Ianto swapping the disks so they can keep it). Ianto playing rugby and getting a penalty because he defended Jack's coat. Then the end *sobs* - so sad. Great job!

holdingoff June 14 2009, 20:54:01 UTC

I imagine Jack & Ianto sometimes discuss new and creative ways to get Tosh hot under the collar- and always make sure the CCTV gets their best sides.

And Ianto really likes that coat, he done did say so.

The end, well. It's an end.