Syntropy (part one)

[holdingoff]

Title: Syntropy (1/10 + Epilogue)
Rating: NC-17
Characters: Jack & Ianto + other TW cast members
A/N: This is the sequel to Something that Starts with "S". The AU defined in that story is carried on here.
Warnings: Any and all Torchwood foibles are fair game.

Comments

[vipersweb]

So excited to see that you're continuing this series. Exciting first chapter.

[holdingoff]

yup. its back. you can try killing, poisoning or threatening and it just comes back better...

oh wait, never mind.

did i mention there's plot in my smut?

[vipersweb]

did i mention there's plot in my smut?
For which I'm grateful. *g* Though I groaned aloud when reading the "battle of the bulge" line. The people in the restaurant in which I was eating looked at me strangely.

[holdingoff]

it seemed like the cheesiest innuendo jack could possibly come up with. i guess i could have done a ww1 reference like the maginot line; but ww2 was far easier.

hopefully no food items were launched across the room.

[teachwriteslash]

Was thinking about this just the other day and missing your writing.

Why does the idea of a pregnant, hormonal Gwen make me cringe?

[holdingoff]

well, its back now. maybe a little scuffed around the edges and venting some frustrations secretly, but hey; that's what writings for isn't it?

you know, a pregnant hormonal gwen in my mind is just the funniest thing in the world. you must not of read my evil little "black hole" ficlet.

pass the gherkins...

[teachwriteslash]

************tries to remember ficlet and decides its too late at night and students who call at 10:00 on Friday are too damn annoying***********

gherkins by the way are simply foul

venting secret frustrations? In writing? What, just because the Doctor often sounds like my mother and I have him bashed about . . . naw

[holdingoff]

gherkins are foul. i totally agree. pickled anything usually has me running the opposite direction.

venting, a yes; the counselor might just be a certain cousin i currently would like to roast on a spit.

[bookwrm89]

I was so excited to see another story in this AU! Wonderful beginning...especially Ianto in a UNIT uniform!

[holdingoff]

its back. pfc jones, the mind does go to happy places, doesn't it?

[bookwrm89]

Very happy places...couldn't concentrate on work this afternoon...LOL

[holdingoff]

it was because he believes in standing at attention for his superiors, isn't it! *grin*

[lupus_malus]

Great smut and interesting plot - good combo!

[holdingoff]

yeah, i'm kinda stuck with inserting plots into my smut; i don't know why.

[nightporters]

Battle of the Bulge? *rolls eyes and grins*

You know (and I'm preparing to duck here) if you are going to carry on with 'S', at some point scissoring has to make an appearence.

My new fandom is very fond of scissoring...

[holdingoff]

i know, it was just the cheesiest pun i could come up with. it was either that or "how do you like this howizter?" but then we'd sink into reference like "rapid repeater" and "easily jammed".

no chapter titles this time, the whole shebang (there's another "s") has one name. i'm apparently stuck. oh no, another "s". shit.