Comments | hokuton_punch: WHEEE.

hokuton_punch

WHEEE.

May 16, 2004 22:24

More of Citroen's story! The very last few pages need more work before being made available for public consumption, so it might be a while before you get the end...

( But you have to read the rest of the middle first anyway, so here you go. )

citroen kelly, writing

Comments 2

gimmick May 18 2004, 09:57:43 UTC

ahh i got kinda annoyed and worried that John's new girlfriend would take John away from Citro, but i happen to like her too!

OMG OMG i cant wait for the continuation.

please hokuto! write more! im sooo seriously in love with this story..

and i was pervertedly waiting for citro to kiss in in the end but DAMN.

ainokitsune June 1 2004, 02:17:50 UTC

Hmm. I'm enjoying this a lot, but I feel like I should offer criticism, since saying, "OMG this is teh bestest ever lol!" really won't help you much...so, bear in mind that everything I say may be completely wrong. It's just stuff and you can take it or leave it, that's completely up to you ( ... )