Comments | hokaidos: hearts and bones (10/10)

hokaidos

hearts and bones (10/10)

Nov 26, 2016 16:56

kaisoo l r l fluff
Jongin swims to escape from the world- and then he meets the boy behind the camera.

( Jongin’s hands fall out of his pockets, now a marionette under the control of the universe, and he spreads his arms, all sense lost at the sight of his Kyungsoo. )

fluff, kaisoo, r, hearts and bones

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anonymous November 27 2016, 03:50:51 UTC

SENPAI!!!!!!!! I love your latest fic SO so much!!! I think it's gonna take me a couple of weeks to recover from it LOL. Your hard work has really really REALLY paid off, Hui! I hope you know that I'm not just saying any of this cuz I'm 'just trying to be nice' or 'fake'. Even back when I first reached out to you I honestly thought (still do!!!) that you're a really truly madly deeply amazing writer. Your talent is so rare and pure and unlike most writers who start 'from the bottom', you went from good to BEYONDEARTHSHATTERINGLYCANTBEPUTINTOWORDS GOOD like how?????? Honestly, I'm so proud and happy that YOU'RE proud and happy of this and really OWNING it.

There is just SO. MUCH. LOVE. in this, so much heart, so many warm moments that killed me and now I'm sure I'm dead as I'm writing this LOL. I can just tell this will be another classic for our KaiSoo fandom. I love the relationship dynamics between all the characters so much (and not just between KaiSoo). There's the right amount of humour and slight angst to go with all the ( ... )

hokaidos December 2 2016, 05:50:49 UTC

i already told you this personally but i'm gonna say it again thank you so much for taking time out to write such a long comment. i truly appreciate all that you've said and i don't know how to get my gratitude across but i hope you can feel it!!! this made my heart all warm and you are amazing for that ♥

abiaar November 27 2016, 08:59:40 UTC

THIS IS SO GREAT WOWOWOW IM SO AHSHSG its been a while since i've been reading long kaisoo fics and this :""")))) my heart it bURNS

I love how you describe swimming and the pool as jongin's safety place?? Like its really nice how you keep referring back to it. And how you describe kyungsoo in jongin's point if view;;; its so similar to how i think of kyungsoo as well and its just really satisfying to read it.

I genuinely love like a lot of things here?? Like how kyungsoo saved jongin from 'drowning' the night before the competition. The slow build is such💯💯💯 ((i love slow build a LOT)) and its just so heartwarming to see they're refering each other as their 'safety place' and its literally the cutest thing ever when will i find someone like this woW;;; And how jongin keeps coming back to kyungsoo bc he feels calm with him !! its so important their relationship dynamic is the best thing here wowow ( ... )

hokaidos December 2 2016, 05:51:20 UTC

thank you so much for reading and taking time out to leave a comment!! heheheh i'm glad you liked it! ♥

nyu_96 November 27 2016, 09:58:28 UTC

Losing sleep to this was so worth it ! I don't think i can make a proper comment, i still have too much feelings from this. This fic was indeed amazing, so much love from there yet you still described their passion so well. I just feel so overwhelmed by everything right now and it feels like i can just say that i loved this fic so much. Thank you a lot for this!

hokaidos December 2 2016, 05:53:25 UTC

i hope you got enough sleep afterwards! thank you for reading and taking time out to leave a comment. i'm so glad you liked it! ♥

anonymous November 27 2016, 13:55:32 UTC

this is the fic of the year for me! You are so talented I love every bit of it. It feels like im in the story watching them like a movie :D

hokaidos December 2 2016, 05:54:03 UTC

that is extremely flattering!! thank you so much for reading and taking time out to leave a comment. i'm super glad you liked it! ♥

sanscherif November 27 2016, 16:17:34 UTC

Like how water is to Jongin, and how Kyungsoo became that same place for him, that was how this entire reading experience was like for me--in a lot of ways, this healed me, and that, I think, really says something about you as an author, Hui-nim. :)

I might have said that in a comment in another fic of yours, but take this as an affirmation, that you are really talented not with words alone, but in weaving stories that make your audience feel. You brought this to us in a time where much love in the world is needed and I couldn't thank you enough ( ... )

hokaidos December 2 2016, 05:56:40 UTC

i read this comment like thrice omg thank you so!!! much!!! for reading and taking time out to leave a comment that makes my heart go doki doki!!!! i'm so glad i managed to achieve this, and that you enjoyed it. your words have definitely reached me and for that i am infinitely grateful. ♥ (sorry for the typos though i fixed a few and i hope there isn't more)