Struggle to fall in love with the cold

Sep 29, 2005 19:45

I woke up this morning with cold fingers under two blankets, and I knew it was fall. I went outside wearing long sleeves and a coat, turned to my father locking the door, and said "There's something worth remembering about the first day you walk outside and feel like this." Like cool water, the air flowed smoothly over my face and ruffled the edges ( Read more... )

school, synaesthesia, metaphors

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boom full_bloom September 30 2005, 01:07:50 UTC
Did you hear the thunder last night? And the wind? You should have. The lightning flickered, and my power flickered, and my dogs whined.

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