Comments | hobbit_eyes: Procrasti-Fic

hobbit_eyes

Procrasti-Fic

Apr 30, 2009 18:46

OK, I was writing on comment_fic, I got a bit carried away... I'm basically posting it here so I can link back to it there.

Title: First Meeting
Words: 1061
Characters: Adam/teen!Angela
Rating: G
A/N: Based on prompt by trillanastra.

( First Meeting )

heroes, writing

Comments 7

trillianastra April 30 2009, 20:35:10 UTC

Oooh, thank you so much! that was brilliant, you write Angela really well, and Adam too.

hobbit_eyes May 1 2009, 00:27:51 UTC

Thanks! I'm really glad you liked it. I've written Adam a fair bit before, but this was my first go writing teen!Angela, so it's good you think that I did it OK!

lunaste April 30 2009, 23:06:38 UTC

Niiice :)

Oh man, even through the mess that was volume three Angela remained FIERCE. Idk how she fared in volume four, but at the end of volume three she was the only character who was still standing upright and wasn't beaten to awfulness by the writers, to me.
I love how you write her :D
And Adam, too! Adam can always lure me back into Heroes fic.

hobbit_eyes May 1 2009, 00:29:00 UTC

Glad you liked! Oh, Adam. He's my absolute favourite character to write fic for, if only because he had SO much potential and was tragically underused in the show. And you know his relationship dynamic with Angela would have been ASTOUNDING.

aurilly May 1 2009, 00:18:53 UTC

You rise to ever higher levels of greatness.

So... I have been to Monte Carlo, multiple times, and you got the aura JUST RIGHT.

at times ignoring the stage completely and staring at the mouldings
Be right back, busy dying from laughter... Perfect. I mean, I LOVE the opera, but sometimes? I look at the mouldings, too. This is just awesome and I love how even though we all love to write Adam as this suave classy dude, that doesn't mean he has to like ALL that stuff. That would be silly, so I thought this made him into a real person.

Adam was watching his awestruck expression with a growing smile. "You feel it?"This was such a fantastic way of showing how they really WORK together. Mohinder isn't completely uncorruptible. There's something dangerous and dirty and even more scandalous that Mohinder is feeling this about money than if it had been something else. Well done! It sets things up very well for the ending with the boat stealing. AWESOME twist. Because again, Adam is a lying crook (like in that bar with Hiro ( ... )

hobbit_eyes May 1 2009, 00:23:17 UTC

:D:D:D:D I'm so glad you like it! I've only seen Monte Carlo in movies like GoldenEye and Ocean's 12 (at least, I think that was a brief shot of Monte Carlo? It was a nice casino, anyway) and it said on wikipedia a few sites of interest and how gambling and yachting were two of the main pursuits, soooo... yeah, they naturally went together :D

Train of thought actually went, "How awesome would it be if they got on a yacht? .... How awesome would it be if Adam WON a yacht? ...... HOW awesome would it be if he'd actually STOLEN it??" I really like that bit, because not only does it show Adam's other side, but it shows he totally gets Mohinder wanting to do the tourist thing, and for Adam, doing Monte Carlo properly involves a yacht. He doesn't happen to have one, but he gets one.

Oh, Madam, why could you never be. *tear*

hobbit_eyes May 1 2009, 00:24:40 UTC

Oh, and random side note? I chose for Adam to have had a fling with the wife of Florestran I BEFORE I read that Florestran I legalised gambling. Some of these things just work out awesomely :D