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Life Among the Gorillas, Chapter 2

Jan 15, 2009 17:25

Title: Life Among the Gorillas, Chapter 2
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Adam-centric, and in this chapter, Peter, Elle, Claire.
Summary: Season 3 AU, one small difference - Adam wasn’t killed when his power was taken. This chapter, Adam tries to escape Pinehearst, and receives help from an unexpected source.
Author’s Notes: Thanks again to nowhack for beta- ( Read more... )

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Comments 3

ibroketuesday January 15 2009, 18:15:19 UTC

This is such an awesome story. I laughed, I squeed, I laughed some more. So much yay for Adam and his lack of powers but continued ~cool~, and for Adam-Claire time, which I wanted SO MUCH on the show. FUCK YOU, HEROES I'm good.

hobbit_eyes January 16 2009, 15:23:10 UTC

Thank you! :D:D:D Writing this IS making me even sadder & madder at the writers for not doing it themselves... but it is also an excuse to create the series 3 I would have wanted to see. Adam will be a very good voice of reason for certain dumb misguided characters.

aurilly February 11 2009, 00:22:32 UTC

Eee! I finally got back tothis and I LOVE it! I love how you've got everyone in it.

Adam raised an eyebrow. “That chap you told me about who was running around eating people’s brains? Why on earth are you wanting to do that?”
“I don’t know. Why am I saving you?”
“You make a fair point,” said Adam
Wow, this was my favorite part. God I love sweet-hearted but kind of stupid Peter. And I love the way Adam is with him. This is such a wonderful extension of the relationship we saw on the show, but in different circumstances. Peter would never have stopped listening to Adam.

I also adored the flashback to Adam and Elle on the docks. I love his whole speech. I was actually taken in by it... and then the head-butt. That was really brilliant pacing there.

I hope you write more!