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Drabble: Round #b2 - Prompt: Pending

Jul 13, 2007 23:12

Title: The Last Win He’d Ever Lose
Rating: PG
Characters: Ogata
Summary: It was in that instant that all the triumph from their last 10-dan game vanished, like Touya-sensei’s commanding presence ahead of him on the eternal road, and all Ogata could see was his own potential.
WordCount: 250 exact :x

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Comments 5

qem_chibati July 14 2007, 09:03:23 UTC

Ooh! I liked this, the way Ogata can see his potential and the possibilities of the future. Ogata's just won a very important match, but he's still got the road ahead of him. :D

daisy_chan July 14 2007, 16:51:51 UTC

::nodnod:: There was more to this but I had to cut it because I keep letting the word count run away from me. XD

I'm glad you liked it though~~

aiwritingfic July 14 2007, 10:41:55 UTC

*hearts*

(Typo dear. Kouya? XD)

daisy_chan July 14 2007, 16:49:00 UTC

jdslkjflakjkflsd Would you believe I kept typing that as 'Kyouya'? Clearly, Host Club is on the mind ::beats self::

::hearts back::

ungalad July 15 2007, 02:17:30 UTC

I like this very much! ^^ Thank you lots for sharing it.