Shortfic: Round w3 - Prompt: Leisure

[ungalad]

Title: The break up
Rating: G
Genre: Gen
Characters: Iijima Ryo
Summary: “The ticking of the clock reminds you of the familiar pachi, and you wonder how are Nase and the others doing.”
Word Count: 656

Comments

[qem_chibati]

Ouch. It always hurts when you have to give up something that you love and put it down to being just a hobby.

[ungalad]

Yup. I think it must be a very difficult thing to face that no matter how much harder you try, you're never gonna make it. D: Thank you for reading. ^^

[ontogenesis]

It hurts so good. :sniff: The second person works quite well for this, because we've all either experienced this, or at least feared it. I really feel sympathy for Iijima now.

and rush to the bathroom, sicken.

Shouldn't the last word be "sickened"?

[ungalad]

Thank you very much for reading ^^ (and for pointing out my mistake, I corrected it).

[aiwritingfic]

Poor Iijima. *hugs him*

*hearts you for writing this*

[ungalad]

Poor Iijima, indeed.

*hearts you for reading*

[osmalic]

Oh god, this hurt a lot. I love the ending, despite it. Thanks for sharing!

[ungalad]

Thank you for reading! ^^

[tarigwaemir]

Oh, ouch. What a nice insight into Iijima. This was great!

[ungalad]

Thank you very much!