Concrit Post 11

[hmd_meme]

How's My Driving?

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[misstakin]

campfuckudie
Santo Vaccarro [Rockslide] || Marvel; New X-Men || rockslidegoboom

discedo
Azula || Avatar: The Last Airbender || bends-lightning
Eli Bradley [The Patriot] || Marvel; Young Avengers || notquitecap
Kurogane || Tsubasa: Reservoir Chronicle || mages-game
Shuichi Shindo || Gravitation || constantidiot

xi-rpg [AU]
Azula Zheng || Avatar: The Last Airbender || huogongzhu

[misstakin]

I'm not sure about the other places, but honestly, I don't think you put enough time into developing your Discedo characters or their CR. Their posts feel very 'out of nowhere' a lot of the time, and I rarely if ever see them tagging around. Azula in particular used to have interesting plots. She (and the rest of your characters there) do have strong voices and you always seem in character with them otherwise.

[fromyourbones]

i know absolutely nothing about you but holy living shit you play santo

[rockslidegoboom]

well hello there sooraya~

[championship]

@a_trialbyfire
✖Dawn » Pokemon Platinum » trainer-dawn

@microcosm_rp
✖Caster » Fate/Stay Night » meteor_witch

@amatomnes
✖Caster » Fate/Stay Night » meteor_witch
✖Sapphire Birch » Pokemon Special » naturalsapphire

@brofist_tv
✖Dawn » Pokemon Platinum » trainer-dawn

@dear_mun/homeless
✖Aile » Megaman ZX: Advent » deliver_a_hero
✖Minako Arisato » Persona 3: Portable » arcana_xxii
✖Revya » Soul Nomad & the World Eaters » soulcradle

[deathbywires]

Here is my crit-

You drop threads. I know you're busy, bb, but you also know I will backtag forever, even if it's something from back in June. So no more, please?

...But other than that you're awesome, so. Have some candy:

[championship]

Yaaaay candy. /BALLOONS TO SIZE OF A KILLER WHILE

ffff, t-thank you. I LOVE TAGGING TOO it's just that after a certain point I hold myself back going 'god it's been so long since I last tagged they wouldn't be interested at all' BUT /jumps into pool of taaags

[brbstomachache]

I figured, but it's not really a big deal XD I have stuff from September and earlier right now that I still actively tag, so don't worry that it's been too long. There is no such thing.

[hitode]

✖ campfuckudie

☆ Ishida Ryuuken (BLEACH) ☆ doctorquincy
☆ Kunogi Himawari (xxxHOLiC) ☆ brokenclover
☆ Touda (Yami no Matsuei) ☆ serpentinfire
☆ Fuuma (Tsubasa -RESERVoir CHRoNiCLE-) ☆ servicewitha
☆ Hajun Cho (I.N.V.U.) ☆ cantkiss
☆ Tezuka Kunimitsu (Prince of Tennis) ☆ getinmyzone
☆ Conrad Weller (Kyou Kara Maou) ☆ wellerthanthou
☆ Kanda Yuu (D.Gray-man) ☆ notahero
☆ Senroh Chigusa (Silver Diamond) ☆ smoothcriminal
☆ Oruha (CLOVER) ☆ tofindhappiness

[heartsaremadeof]

Be less awesome, you make me want to read CLAMP and I am deathly allergic to it.

THIS COUNTS AS CRIT RIGHT.

[brokenclover]

You know you want to.

[hitode]

Just a passing-by stalker, pausing to say I adore your characters.

[angelic_lawyer]

discedo

Ryou Naruse/Tomoo Manaka | angelic-lawyer | Maou
Xerxes Break | allmoveone | Pandora Hearts

Homeless

Shinji Mimura | politicsplayboy | Battle Royale
Tsukasa Doumyouji | saturnsight | Hana Yori Dango
Rui Yamase | sparklingmemory | Lux-Pain
Lt. Col. Sarah 'Mac' MacKenzie | wantstotop | JAG

[hotandcoldrp]

@ capeandcowl
semper_fi_bitch - Sgt. Dexter Grif - [Red vs. Blue]

@ kingdoms_rp
knifebending - Mai - [Avatar: The Last Airbender]
notdiecastatall - Waspinator - [Transformers: Beast Wars]
one_punched - Guy Gardner/Green Lantern - [DC Comics]
samuraiderpderp - Will Powers/The Steel Samurai - [Ace Attorney]

@ memento_eden
future_is_gold - Michael Jon Carter/Booster Gold - [DC Comics]
halberdvshield - Miles Edgeworth - [Ace Attorney]