Concrit Post 8

[hmd_meme]

How's My Driving?

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[compass_ink]

betrayedbyrpg

chosen_wind: Linaly Klauser, Final Fantasy V: Legend of the Crystals

edensphere

feathered_earth: Krile Maia Baldesion, Final Fantasy V
ice_echani: Brianna the Handmaiden, Knights of the Old Republic II

mayfield_rpg

littledroid: T3-M4, Knights of the Old Republic II
properwhitemage: Porom, Final Fantasy IV

paixaorpg

blackwatermage: Neirenn, Inverloch

[feathered_earth]

Thank you XD yeah it's tricky trying to get crit when you're playing from obscure fandoms.

Handmaiden and Kermit do need to fight moar. Actually I keep meaning to talk to you and Jill about that whole self-defense class thing but I'm shy and forgetful orz.

[derivatizing]

I've said it before, I really don't know Linaly's canon. But I love having her. She's the kind of character that makes a mod happy (you're the kind of player that makes a mod happy) the kind that'll push forward and make their own headway through things and try and solve things which is really crucial for Betrayed, especially since as much as the four of us want to use our characters for that it's kind of cheating so we're always, you know, reserving it a bit. But with Linaly she gets to blossom and help what's going on and be curious. And I really like that about her.

So thanks. ♥

[inabathrobe]

at capeandcowl

Islington | Neverwhere | oops_atlantis
(Anthony J.) Crowley | Good Omens | appliest_apple
Andrew Raynes | The Charioteer | mighthaveknown

[aziraphizzle]

CROWLEY'S PRETTY GAY

wait no, that's IC.

[inabathrobe]

THAT IS JUST MY INTERPRETATION. IT IS TOTALLY LEGIT. STOP BEING SO MEEEEEEEAN TO ME.

[before_eight]

IT'S CLEARLY WRONG

/TYPES WONG

/WOOPS

[saltsweet]

O excellent, first page even on hiatus!

crucible_rpg
Orihime Inoue | Bleach | saltsweet

polychromatic
Roxas | Kingdom Hearts | obliviomancy
Tyki Mikk | D.Gray-Man | onlyteasing

Also, a recent drop. If you noticed anything off, I'd love any pointers!

paradisa
Asch the Bloody | Tales of the Abyss | encendres

[gforgreat]

tyki sucks, 'kay?

go drop like. now 8(

♥

[obliviomancy]

/drops

/a rock on your head, that is

:D

[lachry_mose]

/bleeds all oveeeeer

[samekh]

@ discedo

Fay D. Flourite | big_kitty | Tsubasa: Reservoir Chronicle
Kyouya Ootori | glassesgleam | Ouran High School Host Club
Roronoa Zoro | threesword | One Piece
Wiccan/Billy Kaplan | notassguardian | Young Avengers
Wolverine/Logan | aintpretty | X-Men/New Avengers

I just got off hiatus today - and I know my activity's been spotty for a couple of weeks, but I'm getting back into the swing of things. As for the other game I'm in (Kiseki), I didn't list it because I haven't actually played there since THEIR concrit post and I just dropped some people so. But you're more than welcome to leave crit for them too! (anewfight, whiteporkbun and toppedbysister @ IJ for kiseki_rpg!)

[caitlinneko]

thedollsyhouse:
Alphonse Elric (transmuted-soul) (Fullmetal Alchemist)
Sekai Saionji (lefttotheworld) (School Days)
Shilo Wallace (cagedinfection) (Repo! The Genetic Opera)
Riccardo Belli (invasivexam) (Haunting Ground)
Miku Hinasaki (ropefearing) (Fatal Frame)

memento_eden:
Fiona Belli (captured-maiden) (Haunting Ground)

Moar at here~

[el_hustino]

Caitlin so moe.

[caitlinneko]

fdsgdfg d-darn you Hustino ;;