Concrit Post 14

[hmd_meme]

How's My Driving?

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[human_incarnate]

Adam Young || Good Omens: human_incarnate

[useanymeans]

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I love your Adam. I adore Good Omens and it warms my heart to see someone play those characters! And Adam randomly jumping in to Potter-verses is just love. So hilarious.

[human_incarnate]

Yes, Verses are optional for Adam. XD And he likes Potterverse. XD

Now I just have to figure out how to make him a student without messing about TOO much. XD

[human_incarnate]

I feel like the angel wings/demon eyes aspect of the character is tacked on without sufficient justification from either canon. Frankly it makes me wary of threading with him because, coupled with the Unimaginable Godlike Powers, it pings a lot of "Gary Stu" alarms. It seems like you have put a lot of thought into the hows and whys of most aspects of the character, but he's still off-puttingly powerful. That's more canon's fault than yours -- it's funny when a ten-year-old is that overpowered, but in an RP setting, that kind of thing (especially when it's a young adult character) tends to be more gamebreaking than amusing.

[human_incarnate]

I take the 'Half Angel, Half Demon' a bit more literally. In GO Canon, both have wings so I can see it as allowable for Adam to have them as well. Especially if Adam tends to take that literally, and when Adam takes something literally, it tends to become literal. The Eyes, I admit, are purely for me