Concrit Post 14

[hmd_meme]

How's My Driving?

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[yamikonumber7]

@paixaorpg
Rosette Christopher nun_with_guns
DEATH humaniste
Dr. Facilier voodooandhoodoo

@xi_rpg
J musicalmesmer
Levitas fuckyeahawkward
Dr. Facilier hasthecreepy

I know I need more activity all around, but what else? :D?

[aviekokyre]

J: I really liked how you showed another side to J throughout the whole disowned by family (and then not) part. I am curious what he's going to do for Thanksgiving. Does the muse get put on break/hiatus for a few days while he's at his house? What happens when characters go on break, but the mun doesn't?

I also think he's a little overdue for harassing someone a bit or being playful now that the family issue has been taken care of. (This might also be me thinking many people in XI could use some happy fun lately. The poor guys.)

Levitas: How can he make asking someone to set someone on fire seem so innocent, polite, and cute? I want to hug him.

That guy Derek-muse always wants to put in a box: I am laughing that you put voodoo fairy dust in the app. I am also keeping my little muse as far away from him as I can without going OOC. He is so freaking vulnerable... ._.That means I think that you are doing things right. I can read a tag and see and hear the character, and I wouldn't be thinking of ways to stop my muse if