Concrit Post 13

[hmd_meme]

I was going to put up a notice for the next meme, unfortunately, the LJ-notification problem, coupled with mod's real-life business kind of prevented that. But since we're so much later than usual, I'm just going to put the post up. I'm sorry I haven't been around to respond to you guys. We should be back on track now!

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[radian]

@ discedo
Minamimoto Sho | The World Ends With You | whatthefactor
I feel as though my voice as far as the mathspeak goes hasn't been up to par as of late. Maybe it's because I've run out of material or I've simply gotten bored with it, I'm not sure. I'm hoping the class I'm taking this semester will help, but in the meantime does anyone have any suggestions? I've replayed the game/looked through the script a few times, but other than that, I feel like I'm at a loss.
Jounouchi Katsuya | Yu-Gi-Oh! | idkmybffyugi

@ gargleblasted
[Another Day] Minamimoto Sho / "Dr. Pin" | The World Ends With You | pinfiddlerfail

[starfruits]

I never have crit but your Sho is still the best one I've seen. <3333 JOU IS PRETTY COOL TO READ TOO lololol

[whatthefactor]

askfldg t-thank you so much! <3333333;;

[starfruits]

<333 lol I'M SORRY I'M NOT OF MORE HELP because you probably hear that a lot XD

[dutchess_axel]

I think you're still doing great with the whole mathspeak thing (But learning more never hurt, so maybe you should find some websites with some mathenese?), and he's still my favorite Sho ever, and I hope we get to tag some more.

Jou is fun to read, yes, but sometimes it seems like you're struggling with him. IDK how to properly explain it, but it seems like you're just going through a rough patch with him.

So keep it up!

[radian]

Thank you! I've actually got a few sites saved that I try to use besides Wikipedia, and I really do try to look through them, but idk, for me it's a bit disheartening or something because I have no fucking idea what some of it's talking about. For me, it feel most natural when I know what terms I'm using instead of just throwing them in willy nilly. wow I can't believe I just used that term.And you're right, I am struggling with Jou. I really have no idea what to do with him right now. I know what part of the problem is. Even though Jounouchi is the more social of my characters at Discedo, he oftentimes gets put on the backburner for Minamimoto, because I'm more familiar and comfortable with him. I don't feel like I have a decent grasp on Jounouchi yet, and playing him makes me nervous because I'm worried that his interactions are going to end up OOC or something. Once I have some time, I'm going to canon review again for him and just... try to get him out there and tagging. Thanks so much for pointing that out, because man I really

[dutchess_axel]

Then this calculus class will be really good so you can learn more about what the speak means! And I agree, if you don't know what the fuck it means, it doesn't feel natural, and so far it really does feel natural so... yeah don't fuck it up. At least you didn't throw it around willy nilly

I was actually going to say something more, but you really know the exact problems you're having with him (And they don't seem OOC, at least not to me), and that's really good! And you're very welcome.

There is no try, only do or do not. 8|

[pinfiddlerfail]

I hope so. <3 Like... I throw around a few terms I don't fully understand, but overall, I want to know what the hell I'm talking about.

Oh? if you think there's something else, I'd really like to hear it! ♥