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[hmd_meme]

How's My Driving?∞ comment with all the journals you RP with (and the communities they're from

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[fyretoppaaa]

Why am I always late for these things B| /throws everybody in

discedo
Mello (leatherrr)
Victor Niguel (douchexmachina)

theskytides
Sakuraba Neku (hedgephones)

[pikabot]

FAILS TOO MUCH F-

[fyretoppaaa]

/PUNTS FOREVER

F- WHAT? :|

[pikabot]

THAT IS YOUR GRADE. F-

[fyretoppaaa]

... >:

[random_prophet]

WELL I KIND OF NEED TO SEE MORE OF NEKU TO REALLY DECIDE WHAT I THINK, but I think you're doing a pretty good job right now |D Although, more of an aesthetic nitpick than anything; I think strikeouts would work better for his thoughts than braces? Although I can understand why you might not want to use them because people have hackable strikeouts all the time |D;;

[fyretoppaaa]

♥ I'm going to try harder and be more active with him. :> Hee.

And I know what you mean about strikeouts--but yeah, I went with braces due to more self-explanatory plus I have a personal aesthetic nitpick with the way strikeouts kill my hyphens B|;;

[baby_werewolf]

Because you are a fail!Fyre and you fail at everything.

Although...you don't fail at Neku. His characterization is good, and while I'm not entirely comfortable with the {} thing (but mostly because I'm fail too and always want to be responding to what's in there) I do see why you're doing it, and his thoughts are pretty LOL NEKU.

[fyretoppaaa]

BAW >:

XD Maybe I should grey out the {}'s too. XDDDD /piles formatting on forever

I'm glad his characterization seems all right so far, though. :> I'll do my best to kick up his activity a notch or five. :D

[ligtness]

I have absolutely no idea who he (she?) is, but your Victor Niguel username is win. ♥

[fyretoppaaa]

XDXD I like that username too. I'm surprised it wasn't taken.

[tenshinoakuma]

I have a really short memory when it comes to other peoples' characters so useless Ten is useless )': So far nothing's pinged me as being off for Neku, so A+ on that and I like the { } for the thoughts because strikethroughs look really ugly when used a lot. And Neku monologues a LOT.

I just wish I wasn't so fail at interacting with cast mates sob I need my daily dose of Neku mockinggg

[fyretoppaaa]

FFFFFff haha, the fact that he's not off is a huge plus. e__e;; Ah, yes, there's that, too. Paragraphs of strikethroughs make me flail.

XDDDD EVENTUALLY. We shall work something out. ;)

[fyretoppaaa]

... STRIKES, QUIT AMBUSHING MY HTML WAT

[tenshinoakuma]

They're jealous that they're not getting as much screen time as the { }, the hos.

[fyretoppaaa]

There's something that feels off to me about your Mello voice, but I'm not sure I can pin it. He seems to have the right motivations in mind, but he they're not taken to any sort of extreme, and Mello, while focused, was all about extremes.