Concrit Post 12

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I was going to put up a notice for the next meme, unfortunately, the LJ-notification problem, coupled with mod's real-life business kind of prevented that. But since we're so much later than usual, I'm just going to put the post up. I'm sorry I haven't been around to respond to you guys. We should be back on track now!

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[boldlygoingkirk]

Your Scotty is brilliant, though the only thing I have to say is that I'd love to see longer tags with him sometimes. ;D And the only reason why is just because I KNOW you're an amazing writer, and you've got Scotty's voice down.

I also really want to see your Scotty kicking ass more. He's great. <333333

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*sigh* Really, you're so demanding... ;)

[get_me_a_drink]

You are the best Scotty I've seen around, and my critique is we don't play together nearly enough. ._.

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Aw, cheers love :*

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Your Scotty confuses me for the most part, but I'm assuming you're drawing on XI only and not TOS. I could be wrong in that. Either way, I think he could stand to be a bit more enthusiastic sometimes. He just seems a little too mellow to me. Also, it might help to reread your tags before you submit them. You don't make mistakes a lot, per se, but be watchful of your punctuation (or lack thereof).

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Yep. Mainly XI. Fair play, that's all stuff I could probably stand to work on. Still trying to fine tune the characterisation - cheers for the advice. And sadly yes, despite my best efforts, typoes happen. I blame my timezone ;)

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I'd like to see more of him around too. Stupid life getting in the way of RPing... ;P

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Your Scotty is, for the most part, abso-freakin'-loutely brilliant. However, I sometimes worry he's not got enough to him. I know you're not a huge fan of TOS Scotty, so I'm not expecting this guy to be him, but - and this might just be my opinion - Scotty is Scotty and Scotty is sensitive. The way you play him, most of the time, he's got this Kirk-esque flirts-with-everything-that-moves thing going on.

In conclusion, I'm sorry this comment is so confusing. I love him, but think he needs to tone down on the flirting. Yes. That's what I was trying to say.

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*cringes* Uh...yeah. That's something I've really, really been trying to work on. In fairness he tend to be less so when I'm actually doing proper RP, but in TSW and the like...characterisation sometimes takes a back seat to fun. Which is poor form, I know.

Yeah. tl;dr a bit...short version: I'm trying. Honest.

[giftedlinguist]

Aw, Claire, how come you're not fond of TOS Scotty? Is it the totally inaccurate accent? ;)

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Don't get me wrong, I love the character. I just wish I could watch TOS without cringing at the accent :|

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We are? In that case, yeah, we do need to have our pups play together more.