Concrit post 10

[hmd_meme]

How's My Driving?

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Comments

[azkun]

netherworld_rpg
Anise Tatlin - esprit_forte
Marisa Kirisame - regular_witch

mayfield_rpg
Maka Albarn - takeyour_soul
Fon Master Ion - everyoneistrash
Mercedes - frog_kisses
Len Kagamine - servant_of_evil

I'd especially like crit on Marisa (from what little I've done with her OTZ) and Mercedes. But of course if there's something with another character that's a glaring problem, that'd be good to point out too. :x;;;

[el_hustino]

I keep forgetting you're supposedly 'new' to RPing, relatively. You play all your characters wonderfully. Marisa and Mercedes are very good, so don't be afraid to send them around more.

I've been having the same problem lately, but your activity at NW could be a bit better. I don't know about Anise, but there's plenty of trouble Marisa can get involved with or cause. Also, more Master Sparking.

[azkun]

I have a about half a year under my belt now! /o/

And, yeah, I'm pretty terrible about activity. D; *Throws Marisa into the Cave of Ordeals*