Concrit post 10

[hmd_meme]

How's My Driving?

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[stutterbird]

at cape&cowl:
ANGELICA EINSTELLSEHN: dogabuse
ABBY "CLOUD 9" BOYLEN: aerial_bliss
COAT OF ARMS: blazons
ENVY: fluidshape

at implied_spaces:
ABBY "CLOUD 9" BOYLEN: aerial_bliss
CHARLES: justpragmatic
ENVY: fluidshape
LYSANDER "JAY" BYRNE: mourishments
RENO: setblazes


ETC.

[bluespells]

i-i'm not actually in your game, I just stalk it like crazy. orz

Anyway, I love your Cloud 9. She's just pitch-perfect to me. You haven't underplayed her shyness or awkwardness at all, and the situation with Osborn is fascinating.

Coat of Arms is also shaping up well! I love her reaction to the City as just an extension -- a larger stage -- of her project. I can't wait to see where you take her.

[stutterbird]

asfjkh thanks so much. ;3; ♥

[easytochop]

maddie i love your envy and i love you but you will have to take it with a grain of salt because there is one thing i will never love you enough to do

and that is rewatch the first fma anime to give you envy crit

[stutterbird]

LMFAO I HAVEN'T EVEN REWATCHED THOSE SHENANIGANS IN A LIKE A YEAR.

8| maybe i shouldn't admit that out loud.

[stakeh]

mourishments, MADDIE?

[stutterbird]

LMFAO FML.

[tracing]

haha, this is going to be so weird since we've never spoken before, but!

I haven't really been around CnC long enough to give you any insightful crit but I just wanted you to know that I really love Coat of Arms.

Truthfully, I... haven't kept up with comics lately at all, but seeing her around made me want to learn more about her character.

Long story short:

I did end up learning more about her and I think you're doing a great job. She seems to be a character of very few words and even then you still make her a very fun to read.

So, yeah. ♥

[stutterbird]

laskdj HELLO THERE. ♥

you're akihiko's player, right? i've seen you around! you're adorable. 8) thanks so much for commenting. it actually makes me really happy to hear that you've investigated coat! SO THANK YOU SINCERELY.

i will be sure to harass you more in-game and in spam. :VVV

[tracing]

jfoidsjfodsi HI.

yes I am! isjdioasd oh thank you!!! (8;;;

haha, I actually... sat around for 30 minutes wondering if I should send it or not because I didn't want to seem like that creepy eager kid (plus it's almost midnight so my wording is probably not at it's best).

but! in the end I decided I really love reading her posts and I wanted you to know that ifdsjsdoifsd ♥ she seems like a character that would be easy to mess up and I think you do play wonderfully! keep rockin'

[blazons]

alsdj I AM GLAD YOU DID. really, it makes me feel really happy. ;3; YOU ARE NOT CREEPY AT ALL. /scoops you up!