Concrit Post 8

[hmd_meme]

How's My Driving?

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Comments

[feltalone]

My most active
horsewoman_lana
barista_red
bloodinmyear
faithfuldemon
dontbea_racist
melodiousyellow

The lesser
planetbound
wordvision
latefor_reality
nwureunconscous

I also have motherhunter, gwendysin, drawingheroes and ibeyoangel, but they've yet to be used. If you have interest, add them, and I'll eventually get around to them.

[feltalone]

I really really like your Lana - she's interesting, she's deep, and she's sophisticated, at least at times. Interactions with her are interesting and tense, and that's good.

Your Rubys however, I find too sweet. Way too sweet. There's not enough tautness to them, not nearly enough Hell. Not nearly enough or Ruby's usual reactions of being offensive when she's afraid. They're just... filler females with some power. I think you can do better than that! Of course, having three of her is not helping you, it's distracting.

[feltalone]

Thank you. Ruby is one I find difficult, and one of the reasons I took her was the challenge of it. I really appreciate the feedback.

[modestnygirl]

I think you play Ruby really well! Well, I've only really seen you play bloodinmyear, so that's the one I mean. I agree with the other comment that she should have a bit more bite in her, but other then that I think you do her well.

[feltalone]

Thank you. I haven't been playing her for long, and she's a difficult character, especially for me, so I don't expect to have her down right away. I will definitely be working on that.

[modestnygirl]

She would be difficult! I don't think I'd be able to do her. Yeah, I reckon you'll get her to a tee in no time. :P I'm still having troubles with Serena.

[feltalone]

I don't know about that. I'm having a hard time over here!