Concrit Post 4

[hmd_meme]

How's My Driving?

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Comments

[gonsai]

Tossing myself in again. More so than usual this time around...

from bleach_dressing:
tempestabianca = AU!Jushirou Ukitake from onorata
frostedheaven = Female!Hitsugaya, Toshiko Hitsugaya

from siebenrpg:
inukitake = Jushirou Ukitake, Bleach
bleuthunder = Ky Kiske, Guilty Gear
stardust_legacy = Jotaro Kujo, Jojo's Bizarre Adventure: Stone Ocean
rapier_ex = Virginia Maxwell, Wild ARMs 3

from luceti:
hello_boss = Doppio/Diavolo/Soliddo Nazo, Jojo's Bizarre Adventure: Golden Wind
capnteebee = Jushirou Ukitake, Bleach
bigbluehat = Sasarai, Suikoden III
mutsukabezaka = Rohan Kishibe, Jojo's Bizarre Adventure: Diamond is Unbreakable

from theskytides:
tempestabianca = Jushirou Ukitake, Bleach
yareyaredaze = Jotaro Kujo, Jojo's Bizarre Adventure: Stardust Crusaders

from discedo:
7th_warrant = Testament, Guilty Gear
tenkai_soul = Tir McDohl, Suikoden I
daddyslilpyro = Lucca Ashtear, Chrono Trigger

from capeandcowl:
tyrant_ambition = Megatron, Transformers: Beast Wars

from super_powers:
backseat_dragon = Ashton Anchors, Star Ocean

from city_of_versus:
dynamic_may_lee = "May" Lee Jinju, King of Fighters

from suiko_rpg:
pirate_sigurd = Sigurd
rideonchisatsu = Kathy

[usagi_no_hime]

You are a good roleplayer, this I will admit! You are good roleplayer and I highly enjoy seeing you in Discedo lately because I can tell you feel more confident about your muses there than in the other game.

DISCEDO

I love your Lucca, I think she is very interesting and I love how intelligent just somewhat goofy she is. I really think she is a good muse and she is doing well in the game so far. The same for Tir since you know much I like to see him around. I like your Testament as well and I honestly cannot point out a flaw in how you play him.

The only concrit I could possibly give is just stay active as these three muses. You are and have done great CR for the trio, don't stop now.

The Sky Tides

I really don't know what to say and I feel like I would be beating a dead horse to concrit those muses since I know you haven't have a chance to play them to their fullest potential as of yet.

[capsulecorp_tm]

Well, there's only two I can really speak on. So

[gonsai]

I want to badtouch your Lucca because she's so fantabulous.

[frostedheaven]

lolwut

[gonsai]

Sigurd is the only one here I feel I can crit you on, but he seems inactive. If he's not, he's mostly/always with Geddoe. Work on that more first (making him more active and having it being less with Geddoe) and then giving critique will be easier for those of us who want to give it. I wouldn't want to go off on stuff from early last year when you've probably had advice before to work on.

[gonsai]

Geddoe-mun pretty much gave me the same advice, so I'll definitely work on that.

[teal_deer]

Megatron needs to be more active :< but I've said this already.