Crit Post 28

[hmd_me]

Forgot to give a heads up about how late this would go up. :( Sorry! Thanks for being patient, guys. Remember, save the circle-jerking spam for love memes. If you want to tell someone "omg ilu bb," take a few seconds to think of a reason why. Also, if you comment, try critting/giving a constructive compliment to someone else. Pass it forward, and

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[pretending]

ＡＭＡＴＯＭＮＥＳ：
✖ ARIADNE 【inception】 ➡ bizarchitecture

✖ MINATSUKI TAKAMI 【deadman wonderland】 ➡ whoreticultures
I know I've been pretty lame with these two lately, but I plan getting back on the ball soon. ;A;

✖ ROLO LAMPEROUGE 【code geass】 ➡ pretending

✖ SUGATA SHINDOU 【star driver】 ➡ cybodied

ＨＯＭＥＬＥＳＳ：
✖ EDWARD ELRIC 【fullmetal alchemist】 ➡ transmutates

✖ ROLO LAMPEROUGE 【code geass】 ➡ arrests

[umathematic]

@ adstringendum
Vincent Nightray | Pandora Hearts → haruspicate

@ polychromatic
Alan Ryves | The Demon's Lexicon → veritaphobia
Hayato Gokudera | Katekyo Hitman Reborn! → umathematic

[jimmygibbsfan]

I haven't read Pandora Hearts, but I want you to know that I'm absolutely in love with Vincent. He is an absolute joy and pleasure to read, and his threads are fantastically fun. I know this borders dangerously close to a love meme comment instead of something legit for the HMD, but I really enjoy the character!

[haruspicate]

Well, he's been ridiculous loads of fun for me to play on the occasions I get him out. ♥ Thank you!

[headbumped]

bugkey ☆ Kingdom Hearts Re:coded ☆ gargleblasted.

headbumped ☆ Kingdom Hearts Re:coded ☆ sirenspull.

moonlighters ☆ Kingdom Hearts 358/2 Days ☆ queen of hearts.

-Muselist is here.

[not_obsess3d]

I know I haven't tagged you but your Goofy is so fun and and fun. GOOD READS. Foreveeerrrrr. I WILL GET TO THAT WHENEVER I CAN. SRsly.

[headbumped]

;o; I am so glad to hear that you have no idea.

Thank you. c:

And yesss, come to me Xemnasss. But only when we wear our earplugs.

[not_obsess3d]

Yaaaaaaaaaaaay okays :3

wait why don't you want to hear me beautiful voice??? ;o; IT'S BEAUTFIUL.

[trustintomorrow]

Mayfield RPG

Hermione Granger » Harry Potter » inheritedtales
Okuzaki Akira » Mai HiME » promisebreaking
Xion » Kingdom Hearts » chosenreplica
Astrid » How To Train Your Dragon » bestvikingever

DramaDramaDuck

Ron Weasley » Harry Potter » makessacrifices

Luceti

Hermione Granger » Harry Potter » voicesreason

[reddestrobin]

The only one of yours I've really played with is Hermione. I really really enjoy seeing her.

I think the only thing I would ever suggest is that I don't think she EVER seems to lose her cool very much? Ron being droned was the closest, and I think that even Hermione DOES lose it once in awhile. Everyone does.

HONESTLY THOUGH THIS IS ALL I COULD THINK OF FOR YOUR CHALLENGE ALSDJFKJASHKJHSADF

I love playing with you, never drop, k?

[trustintomorrow]

Yeah, that's a bit of a juggle at times though because Hermione loses her cool at what can be the oddest moments. Mostly we see it in DH when she's totally out of her element, Mayfield's actually a bit more so than the forest and such, but it does take a bit to completely make her lose her cool (completely losing her cool always involves RON so that gives an idea).

BUT MOSTLY, from canon, losing her cool means, er, well... :| Bursting into tears and she hasn't had complete reason to yet or Harry's never around for it (because.. in I think three threads with Ron she did break down).

It's just something that has to find a balance for.

**And with the Ron droning she's acting a lot like in regards when he left in the forest. She's trying to put up a strong front when around Harry but breaking down later about it.

[charmingdoe]

I've just got one thing to say: Your Hermione is amazing. Her voice is spot on from what I've seen so far, and I can definitely hear her voice in her tags. And just. I'm really looking forward to future interactions.

So yea! Keep up the amazing work! *^*

[skirtindanger]

★ splendorocity
Maka Albarn → skirtindanger; (Soul Eater)
Atoli → ofdeceit; (.hack//G.U.)

★ damned
Lion Ushiromiya → hersalvation; (Umineko no Naku Koro Ni)

★ campfuckudie
Maka Albarn → skirtindanger; (Soul Eater)

Whatever's on your mind, feel free to hit me up about it. o/