Concrit Post 15

[hmd_me]

After a few real-life, maintenance, and password issues, hmd_meme is back! Apologies for the delay! EDIT: Expect the next post in about a month. We'll announce the exact date about a week ahead of time, so watch this journal.

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[lottery]

Honesty would be highly appreciated, especially with those characters with a star (*) next to their names.

dear_mun/sixwordstories/otherwise homeless
Anna Milton/Annael* - Supernatural - againanangel
Charlotte "Lotte" LaBouff* - Princess & the Frog - andbeaprincess
Lestat de Lioncourt - The Vampire Chronicles - enamoringly
Namine - Kingdom Hearts - fairoblivion
Mia Fey - Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney - inspiritingly
Lucifer* - Supernatural (AU, OC, I don't even) - lovedthefather
Lois Lane* - Superman Returns - needsnohero
Ruby - Supernatural - plaguewasbig
Aphrodite/Venus* - Greco-Roman mythology - venusfigurine

There are more (I know, right?!), but these are my "main players."

beyondtherift
Lois Lane* - Smallville - gottogetgoing

Been on hiatus lately, because I suck. :(

Have at 'er! Again, I reiterate, be honest. I can't promise a 100% grasp on any character, especially those I'm playing for the first time (i.e., most of the d_m/sws crowd). I won't get better unless you tell me what I need to improve on! :) ♥

[wearsnomask]

Youuuuu do not suck. RL is evil and it's been eating my brain, too. ♥

First of all, I am so glad I found you. Your Ruby is like--idek. She is amazing to me, whenever I see her. I want to throw someone at her each and every time and I am somehow a bit intimidated. :3 There's just the right amount of snark.

Lois, I'd need to watch Smallville more, I haven't watched since the Luthors up and left. :( From what I've seen though she's also got the right amount of snark and attitude. She's driven and she's always after the story, even while having a heart to heart with Clark (like that thread where he admitted he was Blur.) I love that you can tell she's a reporter, and I think that's lacking in a lot of other Lois' I've seen around.

D: I fail at crit, I've only got love. But at least I gave examples?

[lottery]

Ugh RLLLLLL. I shall soon return, I hope!

And awww, thank you so much, bb.

Ruby was always a kind of difficult character for me to swing into just because she's got such a unique way of talking. Perfecting it is a process, and feel free to poke her anytime o/

I tried really hard to inject what little I remember from my journalism classes senior year of high school and freshman year into Lois. They were the basics, but I know that print journalism relies on stuff like that, and so would Lois. :D

[wearsnomask]

It's a hard life. With lots of essaying right now. :(

It's okay, bb. We'll always have squirrels and... lulz crack fics at ~*four in the morning*~ idek.

I seriously think you have her voice down perfectly. I'd love to see more of her. :3

YOU SUCCEED. ilu♥

[leadhisarmy]

OH MY GOD THAT'S YOUR SAMIFER? I had no idea, omg, here's some concrit, stop being good at EVERYONE YOU PLAY, it took me so long to figure out againanangel and plaguewasbig were both you because you have them both down so perfectly and I ... never would have guessed that someone could so perfectly get Ruby and Anna both. ;_; Seriously, I'm so impressed with your life right now. ♥

Oh, this is also obiwanning if you ... didn't already know.

[lovedthefather]

HA HA YES. I try to be super-secret and covert so that people don't pick up that they're the same person. I blame acting back in high school where I was encouraged to have a mindset per character ♥ XD

That icon is amazingggg, btw. Lucifer is happy you liked his cracktastic gift, Rubyyyyyy ♥

[leadhisarmy]

I try to do the covert thing but I usually fail within a fortnight. So, props for pulling it off so awesomely. ♥ I did some immense stalking to try and figure out if it was you and I still wasn't sure til Anna and Ruby were posted together in the same way on a meme. Yes, I'm a dedicated stalker, ok. BUT YEAH, it's amazing because you seriously make them so separately awesome. ♥

Gracias~ And lmfao Ruby loves her barbie dream home ok. ♥ It's the best thing of her life, her and Elle got to play ~Barbies.~

[solarsteel]

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