Concrit Post 15

Apr 22, 2010 17:05

After a few real-life, maintenance, and password issues, hmd_meme is back! Apologies for the delay! EDIT: Expect the next post in about a month. We'll announce the exact date about a week ahead of time, so watch this journal.

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thatdemonbitch April 22 2010, 08:43:13 UTC
@damned/sixwordstories/thebennetcrewClaire Bennet | autophoenix | Heroes

@crowdedhour/sixwordstories/angelsandassesRuby | thatdemonbitch | Supernatural

@sixwordstories/thebennetcrew/creeperhouseJames T. Kirk | yeswedo | Star Trek XI
Anna | angelfood_cake | Supernatural
Ruby | leadhisarmy | Supernatural
Chuck Bass | debarted | Gossip Girl
Peter Petrelli | gota2ndchance | Heroes
Dean Winchester | obiwanning | Supernatural
Elle Bishop | causeblackouts | Heroes

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blueshocks April 22 2010, 09:19:08 UTC
I know you want crit, and it's not dick sucking Friday but...you're going to get dick sucked anyways.

Mostly this time, I want to talk about how amazing your Ruby is. I think you capture her really well and I loved how you played out her reactions to having a friend, and caring what happened to them via the Elle gets possessed storyline. You show a lot of depth and thought into her character, and you get her sarcastic tone just right.

Your Claire is one of two I can stand in the world, the other being Brandi's. So you should feel proud. Someday, we need to do more with the lesbian adventures.

Most of the others I've only played with here and there, so I can't comment much. Bring Anna out more, there's some crit. Cause...I love Anna.

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giftedvisions April 22 2010, 09:25:59 UTC
LMFAO i love your not-crit. ♥ You get away with it because you gave me specific things I'm doing right, which is still constructive.

AHHH I'm so glad to hear that. I worry a lot that I fall back a little too heavily on Ruby's awkward remorseful side or her witty one-liners so I'm glad it comes through as just ... giving her depth and not trying to excuse her actions/redeem her in any way. I really like BNW with Ruby because it gives me a chance to really show that what she had with Sam WASN'T someone actually caring about her and that she knew they were using each other the whole time and was okay with that, so when people legitimately care, she doesn't know how to handle it. Because she's a demon and she's used to the racism of people can never like a demon.

I agree that we need more lesbian adventures, because Claire/Elle is just beautiful to me, and I'm really glad you like my Claire because I try s-so hard. ;_;

AND I WILL DEF. BE BRINGING ANNA OUT MORE. I have been getting a better muse for her bc of my threads with angel_ofthe and ( ... )

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likedillinger April 22 2010, 11:09:38 UTC
I SEE YOUR "MOAR ANNA TIME" PROMISE THAR. O_O

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autophoenix April 22 2010, 11:11:03 UTC
I'll post with her like Friday and I'll make it nice and OTA so you guys can reply to it and so can holytaxexaminer and diefirst and all of my Anna slutting verses will be happy.

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hasasoul April 22 2010, 10:41:01 UTC
Your Claire is one of my favorites forever. And so is your Peter. And your... everyone. Your ____ is pretty much always my favorite ____. Because I live to suck your dick. One of the things I love that you do with your character is that you take tiny insignificant details in canon and run with them and base legit headcanon off of them and it always makes me so happy when people do that because I feel like that's the difference between playing a character and playing a character believably. I especially feel this way about your Claire, Peter, Ruby, and Jim, but that just might be because those are... my favorites of yours to suck dick about.

You should post with Peter moreeee because I need him in my life. And I know you have performance anxiety about Jim but you should... throw him out more sometimes too because I enjoy life so much when you do. :3

I sure do wish Angel... had more icons that weren't confused or brooding.

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autophoenix April 22 2010, 11:15:08 UTC
MMMM see you get away with dick sucking bc like I told Katie, you put in actual ... specific things that I'm doing right. It's as helpful as knowing what I'm doing wrong, you see ( ... )

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intuitivelyapt April 22 2010, 11:22:43 UTC
LMAO yeah I tried not to talk about me because I didn't want that to turn into... sucking my own dick but that's something I try to do a lot especially with characters I'm anal over like Sylar.

Buuuutttt you said before Thursday earlier and now it's Thursday and you owe me a tag there anywayyyyyyy. /whines and guilttrips you like an evil slut.

Awww ok just know that... I am waiting. In the bushes. Like always.

I'm working on it okay. Angel is.. hard work. :c

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giftedvisions April 22 2010, 11:30:12 UTC
Lmfao yeah It really show and comes through and I'm not going to ... repeat exactly what you said to me, but it's a big THIS to you in regards to it. Because you do it awesomely.

I was not anticipating getting guilted by you and Shana into a Cordy post that was like over 9000 comments. Or anticipating that Claire's post would legitly be 500. :c I would post it today but it's Thursday so Sam and Dean would be busy doing ... their hotel shit with Gabe today, so they couldn't talk to Peter. So, it'll probably be Friday, but I have resolved to have it by the time the weekend's out. AND I KNOW I OWE YOU A TAG THERE but I'm sleepy. ;_;

Like always. You creepy bitch.

THIS SOUNDS FAMILIAR. 8|

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intuitivelyapt April 22 2010, 11:33:34 UTC
LMFAO I know I just... had to point that out. Because I'm horrible and like to eat your tasty tears of sadness. :c As I am the queen of them.

LOOK IT'S DIFFERENT OKAY. BECAUSE... I SAID IT IS.

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giftedvisions April 22 2010, 11:34:47 UTC
LMFAO you're a hooker like that it's ok I understand. I'm trying real hard ok. You should just ... bask in my hard work. And appreciate it.

NO IT'S THE SAME SHIT. NEW RULE, I POST FOR PETER WHEN YOU POST FOR ANGEL. ... AFTER HE JOINS TEAM FREE WILL BC THAT IS STILL RESOLVED TO HAPPEN BEFORE SUNDAY.

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hasasoul April 22 2010, 11:41:08 UTC
I do. :c when I get it. ... eventually.

OKAY YOU KNOW WHAT Angel isn't even part of BNW and now you guys are getting Rumi so you... won't need me anymore. Or my deadbeat Angel. The end. ;_;

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giftedvisions April 22 2010, 11:45:40 UTC
You are being Sylar rn and my life is Peter and I'm going to go Christian Bale on you in like 2 seconds and just slap you around in the streets of Ireland and we can reconcile with btutsex.

ANGEL IS IN AMITYVILLE OKAY BESIDES WE DON'T EVEN KNOW IF RUMI IS HAPPENING SHE JUST THREW IT OUT THERE AS A THOUGHT. She's got a busy life with Poly and Taxon. She might not even be up for an SWS verse with him, or tolerate my horrible inconsistent timeline Cordy like you and Shana do. Okay I had that part typed before she ... took me up on my earlier verse offer. :c

But still, I will always ~need~ you because you're one of my favorite RPers in existence and I would suck your dick all day if I could.

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hasasoul April 22 2010, 11:48:49 UTC
LOOK I AM SYLAR I HAVE A LOT OF NEEDS. A lot of... really needy needs lmfao.

ANGEL IN AMITYVILLE WOULDN'T CARE ABOUT TEAM FREE WILL DEAN CALLS HIM A STRIPPER. :C Yeah yeah see. That's... what I thought.

Well... good. ;_; My dick needs it it's a very... needy dick.

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giftedvisions April 22 2010, 12:00:57 UTC
I CAN SEE THAT BUT I'M STILL GOING TO CHRISTIAN BALE ABOUT YOUR NEEDS.

Dean calls him a stripper lovingly. Admit it, Bambi is the best nickname ever.

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intuitivelyapt April 22 2010, 12:04:56 UTC
LMFAO it makes me think of Scrubs and Carla and JD bc that was... Carla's special name for him. And it makes me smile.

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