Concrit Post 15

[hmd_me]

After a few real-life, maintenance, and password issues, hmd_meme is back! Apologies for the delay! EDIT: Expect the next post in about a month. We'll announce the exact date about a week ahead of time, so watch this journal.

How's My Driving?∞ Comment with all the journals you RP with (and the communities they're from

Comments

[anonymous]

Keep it up ♥

[anonymous]

I'd like to see more substance in his replies. A lot of it seems to be just repeating questions back at the other person, or a very short and empty reply. It doesn't give much substance to work with, making threading with you difficult or bland. You don't have to keep making all your replies fast and easy so that you can tag everything going on. Slow down, try to put some thought into them, or some effort into making them more interesting.

I know you love all things French, but I think that's coming into your characterization too much. Just because Abel is French doesn't mean he's an all-knowing Frenchophile.

[moezilla]

capeandcowl
Yuugi Mutou and the Other Yuugi // gamblers
I'm currently on hiatus, but I'd love criticism regardless!! I'm aware that my activity is a constant issue, but I've been doing better these past few months. Also, I'm curious if the self-log I wrote was too much? Should I do more? Or keep it to a once a month kind of deal?

I'm open to answer any questions!
relevant threads and logs: here, here, and here.

[radian]

I have nothing of value to add since your Yuugi is great from what I've seen. And the game thread was awesome.

.... joooiiiinnnn usssss.

[ration]

I've been pretty scarce lately, so I'm not sure there's much to say buuuut.

@xi_rpg

knowyourfears | Terrance Ward | Avengers: The Initiative
fuckyeahpills | Chris Miles | Skins
numbbelligerent | Faith Lehane | Buffy the Vampire Slayer

@discedo

nomakothx | Reno | Final Fantasy VII

They also should all have their own anon-enabled crit posts if you'd rather take something up with me in private.

aaaand anyone from here

[godofcologne]

Just going to say that I would love an opportunity to see Faith interact with either Thomas or Lara. I'm just not sure how it would work with her on the Bromarine.

[twilightsparkle]

@thedollsyhouse

lingeringscent (Fatal Frame)
neverbeignored (Tales of Symphonia)
himurobound (Fatal Frame)

@memento_eden

cellphoning (School Days)

[andvainglorious]

@discedo/wonderlandwars

The Master | andvainglorious | Doctor Who | Crit Post Anon on/IP off/screening off

I did have a bit of query with regards to how I was playing him at Discedo, so if anyone's interested in that, I can give a link. Otherwise, anything at all would be appreciated. Please keep in mind that he is currently chipped in Discedo at the moment, which does influence how I'm having him act, as his current 'immediate' aim (sort of) is to have it removed.

@wonderlandwars
Xerxes Break | allmoveone | Pandora Hearts | Crit Post Anon on/IP off/screening off

I'm on hiatus with him at the moment because I've been feeling really, really shaky with his voice and I'm not really sure what I'm doing/where I'm going with him, so I'd appreciate anything at all to help me get back in the groove with him.

/EDITS AGAIN-- Feel free to comment on any other characters you know I play around about the place.

[procrastinado]

/insert extremely helpful constructive criticism here

[momentarily]

/is in awe of the constructiveness

[procrastinado]

also the master and russia crazying at each other is kind of lulz /just did some spontaneous stalking