Crit Post 23

[hmd_me]

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[soreplaceable]

@ luceti

Fon Master Ion | Tales of the Abyss | soreplaceable
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Cheyenne | Original Character | mmmfilletofsoul
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I've had a rough time with Ion lately and I know it's definitely affected my activity with him, on top of the fact that I'm already a slow tagger. Things I'm doing wrong and things I'm doing right (as far as this past month go) are much appreciated! <3

[lotuswiththorns]

Aha, you ended up right above me! I just wanted to say that I really like what I've seen of Cheyenne. I haven't tagged her yet, but I've read some of her threads, and she's very intersting. It's clear you put a lot of thought into her, and you're consistent with her, which is what I like to see in an OC. As for Ion, I'm still just glad you came back...! I need to tag him more myself, I'm such a lurker...

[kittanylilac]

That's what she said! okay no

Ahh, thank you! I'm always glad to hear people like Cheyenne. <3

And as for Ion, clearly I need to have him start tagging other people some more, too. :|b Mostly because I think a friendship between him and Miu would be an adorable trainwreck full of trolling!