Concrit Post 22

[hmd_me]

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[transwarp_beam]

WITNESS MY MANY MUSES

Assorted Scotties:
transwarp_beam - Reboot
warpedrive - Mirror
giveallshesgot - Genderswapped
mi_aosda - Deaged (20s)
meryscott - More deaged (teen)

Trek OCs:
lynn_creed - Cmmdr Lynn Creed
notacactus - Lt Jda Zagri
lisburn_lion - Lt Fran Lynch
into_the_skies - Lt Adrian Phillips

Stargate:
wraithcmmdr - Todd
stoptalkingplz - Zelenka
thatsabadplan - Genderawapped Jack

Misc:
seal_the_deal - Crowley [Good Omens/Supernatural]
jackoffhearts - Jack Harkness [Whoniverse]
liestoeveryone - Jonathan Carnahan [The Mummy]
smegginghell - Dave Lister [Red Dwarf]
nomentalcensor - Eli Loker [Lie to Me]
sonofarnor - Aragorn [LotR]
thguarding_dark - Sam Vimes [Discworld]
thtyourbestshot - Face [A-Team]

[mccoy_joanna]

Ok. Crit. Um...

Yeah, no. I got nothin'. Sorry!

I adore your Scotty and have since day one. Never mind that your Crowley is THE Crowley as far as I'm concerned even if I haven't had the pleasure of playing with you. Chy sings your praises and has linked me to threads that I've gone "God damn I wish I had an SPN muse so I could jump on this" because it's that awesome. (Or get up the nerve to throw Faith at Crowley. Either or.) So there you have it. You are amazing and I need to play with you more at some point when I don't utterly fail with tags.

[transwarp_beam]

*flailyblush*

Bahahahaha Faith and Crowley would just end so badly. But in an AWESOME way

[faiththatfuelsu]

God you're not kidding. They'd either kill one another or become drinking buddies.

P.S. I had to bring out the icon just for you.

[hiscatalyst]

Right. Crit.

1. We only have like three active threads right now.
2. You have classes and friends and a life basically I am not able to have you in my pocket always - though you are improving on this by ignoring your need for sleep.
3. Your characters are intimidatingly awesome.
4. You don't have a companion muse for every single one of my muses.

Work on these things.

[transwarp_beam]

1. MORE THREADS NOW. OR NOT NOW. LIKE FIVE MINUTES AGO
2. Pffffft life? Since when do I have a life? Lies.
3. Okay. I will totally be less awesome from now on
4. LIES I SO DO. Or all your cool muses anyhow.

[mybrotherskeep]

1. Hey, whose tag is it *POINTED LOOK*
2. Whatever you have one. Mostly because otherwise there'd be no reason for you NOT TO BE HERE ALWAYS.
3. Work on it.
4. Lies. I have so many more that you can make companions for.