Concrit Post 22

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[star_dew]

- luceti
Miyabi | Okami | chiisaichou
Ninetails | Okami | ankoku_fox
Dist the Rose | Tales of the Abyss | its_rose_damnit
Presea Combatir | Tales of Symphonia | not_klonoa

- abyssdressing and dear_mun
Anise Tatlin | Tales of the Abyss | soaringblast
Asch the Bloody | Tales of the Abyss | ashen_knight

I'd really like some feedback on Ninetails, Anise, and Presea especially. Anise is going to be reset soon, so I'm not too worried, but Ninetails and Presea from Luceti I've been a bit worried about, the latter more so. I'd love some good feedback on how I'm doing and how to possibly improve. Thank you.

[meowzy_chan]

Well Roxy, as much as I want to give good feedback on Presea, the thing is that I haven't actually seen her around enough to form a proper opinion. I try to comment to her whenever she posts an entry, but that happens very rarely, and she never responds to one of my characters.

From what I've seen of her over the last... half a year, I suppose, she seems very good. I like how you handled her emotional state after she got her Keycrest. It's just the activity that needs improvement, as far as I can tell.

[star_dew]

Yeah, I'm very aware of how lax I've been with her activity. I think it's because of the knowledge that I don't have a firm grasp on her character as well as figuring out things for her to really do (plus maintaining the other three), that I don't post with her. Thankfully, I think the event will get her out and about more, and I do have some plans for her, but yeah. It's probably just nerves and uncertainty on my part.

Thanks, though. I'm really sorry I haven't tagged your characters much, either. I keep meaning to, then get distracted then busy and ugh. ;; But really, thank you. Hopefully I can maintain Presea's muse from back then.

[meowzy_chan]

Well, I'm not trying to guilt trip you or force you to tag me more. I'm just explaining why it's hard for me to judge her characterization because the lack of activity.

Have you tried canon reviewing? The game or the manga, not the OVA.

[not_klonoa]

Oh, no, you're not! I was just saying, that I do apologize, because I really enjoy threading with your characters a lot, and it's a shame I don't do it more often.

I didn't think of the manga! I'll try doing that instead, because I honestly don't have the time to play the game again. Thank yoooou.

[meowzy_chan]

Oh man, it is a shame. Next time you post with Presea, I'll just dogpile her with Gelda and Yuan.

Yup, there's a really good manga scanlation out there and in the overall, it's very accurate when it comes down to personality.

[not_klonoa]

hvhdhe WELL I'm gonna post with her first for the event, so dogpile awaaaay~! There will be much awkward to go around for them both.

Do you have the link? And can you PM it to this journal? I'm at my sister's house now, so I can't save the link. :\

[meowzy_chan]

IIII... actually don't have the link. I know it's a site where you can read scanlations, but I have no clue what it's called.

[not_klonoa]

8| Drat. I'll try and look for it on my laptop when i get home.

[ankoku_fox]

Yeah, I do tend to drop threads sometimes, and it is unfortunate and makes me feel like such a jerk. Maybe I bit off more than I could chew with four characters, especially now when I'm so abnormally busy with school. Thanks, though. I'll probably get a bit more active with the winter break coming up, but we'll see.

Thanks, Kazzi, I'm glad I'm doing well enough with my characters that people at least like to thread with them!

[fontech]

I just wanna say what a thrill it is to play with you, obviously with Miyabi but also with Dist! It's a total treat to have a Dist who's actually interested in Asch and Luke, and hopefully over time there'll be more (and interesting) threads with those three. |D I think you play him fabulously.

[chiisaichou]

E-Eeeee. Thank you so much, Akai. |D I'm really glad you think that about my Dist! He's always been super fun to play as and I love interacting with the entire ToA cast with him just because of the character dynamic they all have. I especially love tagging your Asch as well, since the two honest to god kind of hate eachother and would soon trip the other than compliment them.

Also your thread with Guy made me cry. 8| ihu. ♥