Concrit Post 22

[hmd_me]

How's My Driving?
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Comments

[aatxe]

cape&cowl
terrance "trauma" ward / iknowyourfear
melee / martialartistic

[stutterbird]

I HAVE TO SAY that while you played his grown-up self very well, I think it was so smart to reboot him because you play his complexities and his struggles so well. You've really interpreted the mindset of a teenage boy who is being slammed by his powers, his heritage, and his past. AND THE ONE THING I REALLY ADMIRE IS THAT you've taken an anti-social character and STILL gotten great, believable CR, and you don't take a tragic character and play them as only tragic. He is witty and funny in a dry, deadpan way that I really enjoy.

[supergabbie]

I'm so happy that you came back to us. Trauma is so rounded and real, I love that you can make him more than the stereotype I think a lot of people see him as. You can see how he feels and why he does things, even not-so-great-things, and I am thrilled at the chance to get to play with him (and you) again.

[thanoodles]

I pretty much love all the plot directions Trauma has been taking. His posts and threads are always interesting to read from.