Concrit Post 22

[hmd_me]

How's My Driving?
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∞ Reply to other people's comments (anon or logged in) with constructive criticism.
∞ Learn from the suggestions and profit!

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[supergabbie]

@capeandcowl
NORMAN OSBORN, ❝marvel 616❞ | greengosborn
FELICIA HARDY, ❝spectacular spider-man❞ | acrossyourpath
CHRONOS, ❝justice league unlimited❞ | chronosyoudidnt
ELECTRO, ❝marvel 616❞ | electrouble
HARVEY DENT/TWO-FACE, ❝marvel 616❞ | indentcision

@the posthumans
MAXWELL LORD, ❝dc universe❞ | retconman
HARRY OSBORN, ❝marvel 616❞ | harriedosborn

@damned
NORMAN OSBORN, ❝marvel 616❞ | greengosborn

(I'm still kind of... trying to ground myself here, orz.)

[fishnets]

I absolutely adore playing with you and admittedly, the only character of yours I am extremely familiar with is Max (and... maybe Chronos, I suppose!) and I enjoy talking to you about your characters or just reading about them.

Thank you for being so nice and playing such fantastic dudes (...and Felicia!). ;;

[supergabbie]

akhf, thank you! ;; I love playing with you as well, I'm happy that Zatanna and Felicia are getting along. And I should toss Max at you in d_m again at some point.

[fishnets]

You're quite welcome! I do think I owe you a tag on that thread, actually. And really, no matter how late it is, who can pass up harassing Eddie? (No one.) Yes, please! I also don't mind being textwalled about Max, like, ever. I find the thought you put into him and the depth of his characterization to be fascinating, well-rounded, and awesome.

[supergabbie]

No rush! Harassing Eddie may as well just become a national pastime at this point. kshfa. THANKS. Same to you, really, which is why I need to hurry up and hit your thread up. You're spoiling me. :'|

[fishnets]

Interests: cake, putt-putt golf, kittens, harassing Edward Nygma. Eh, take yer time. Or not at all, whichever! I'm just glad anyone likes me at all, man!

[stutterbird]

alkjd LET ME JUST GET MY FANGIRLING OUT OF THE WAY FIRST SObS because i have always and will always think that your norman osborn is the best ever and the only one for me. 8| even though my canon exposure to him is basically limited to dark reign: young avengers and the relevant bits of avengers: initiative, he STILL reads so believable and an accurate extension of his canon.

FELICIA IS JUST PRECIOUS. electro is A+ and should continue to troll the community with hood and zoidberg and terry. AND HARVEY. harvey, i feel so lucky to have gotten to do a plot where i had extensive interaction with him because he's great and he reads well to me, even though i've... basically only read the charlatan arc with him in it. 8| i have to give you props for dealing with his coin dealio and the two sides of him as a character very well. IT'S GOOD AND NOT CONTRIVED AT ALL.

[supergabbie]

MADDIECAKES

Thank youuu bb. ♥ I always really worry about them, I'm glad that Norman and Harvey read well! AND I ALWAYS WORRY ABOUT OVERDOING THE TROLLING... but. I loved plotting with you, so I really appreciate you giving me the opportunity to throw Harvey at Abby and stretch my legs with him, so to speak. /CLINGS

[liverletdie]

I just want to reiterate just how much I love getting the opportunity to play with you. I love the tweaks and the way you really think out your plots and you put all of this work into them; you really make them realistic in the way you've set them up, and I've always admired that from you. I'm honored to have you as a cast mate and get to play with you in any way I can; and I love being able to be involved with the story you're telling.

[supergabbie]

Thank you baby. ♥ I love playing with you too -- thank you for all the wonderful plotting!

[supergabbie]

.... I'm just going to leave a drive by creepy message.

You're one of the reasons why I'm terrified of apping at cnc/tph because of how fantastic you are and I enjoy stalking your posts.

fml i'm such a creeper.

[supergabbie]

alksfh anon, you are so sweet. Please don't be afraid! I would love to play with you. ♥

/scoops up

[supergabbie]

Totally! We still need to kick off Norman and Crane's little clinic thing and other such creepy plans... :) Thank you, though, that all makes me really happy to hear. ♥ And Two-Face! I'm glad I'm not completely butchering him yet kahfjf /hides.

Yes! Unless there's a predetermined side that should come up for plot reasons. Otherwise I play around.

[godofnicehair]

I had a gigantic thing of praise here that my connection ate, but basically all your characters are the best ever and I love them all.

[supergabbie]

Meg you are too kind. ♥