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[67metallicar]

angelsandasses

Human!Impala || Supernatural || 67metallicar (also at croatoan_end)
Gabe Goodman || Next to Normal || hurtswheni_play
Fiyero Tiggular || Wicked || falls_to_me

croatoan_end

Lust || Supernatural/OC || mywickedlust

sixwordstories

Fiyero Tiggular || Wicked || brainlessprince
AU!Gabe Goodman || Next to Normal || cantcallmetwat

[hailtheboyking]

OMG where do I start? ♥

I LOVE your human!Impala. I'm always worried about humanized anything but dear, I cannot tell you how she blew me out of the water. I absolutely adore her, and the fact that she's so protective of the boys makes me all warm inside. Hell, if it isn't Dean pulling Sam out from anger, it's probably going to be her for the fact that she's totally the mom he wished he had. So ILU so much for that and I wish I had crit for her but god, she's PERFECT the way she is.

And Lust. Oh god, I LOVE reading her threads XD She's both the right amount of sexy but pouty five-year-old yet just hilarious demon. I can't wait till we kick off more in the comm because the hijinks she's going to cause are going to be wonderful, and I'm super happy that someone could bring a sin to life proper ♥

The only crit I have is the fact you didn't tell me you played a Fiyero. BRB dying of glee now.

[brainlessprince]

♥

Honestly, can I say that seeing you say that about Immy makes me super relieved? Because I fully admit that since the beginning I might be playing her wrong and had so many reservations about playing a humanized character.

Lust is probably one of my favorite characters to play (probably only after Immy and maybe Gabe). And I so can't wait to have her participate in some crazy, demonic hijinks!

FFFF, you're making me want to break my older one out again, because he's such a derpface crazy fun to do stuff with.

[hailtheboyking]

It's always hard playing something humanized, but with the boys growing up pretty much in her (...as really weird as that sounds, but it's true) I'm sure she'd end up with that motherly concern and just, being normal around them, since they're just HERS that she's always taken care of and vice versa. I think she's wonderful, and don't worry about her in the least.

She's just adorable <3 One of these days, she's going to have to freak the hell out of Sam. It's only proper <3333

OMG that would be amazzzzzzzzzzzzzing. I tried playing Elphaba a long time ago, but he would possibly make me bring her back around? :D

[falls_to_me]

You've basically just hit everything that I've been trying to make sure I keep in mind when I play her on the head. That's pretty much part of why she's still fighting so hard for Sammy in CAN, she's always going to see him as her little boy (because, yeah, she's totally a mom deep down) and can't stand the thought of seeing him or Dean hurt. ♥

Like by calling him Daddy while trying to seduce him? :D

OMG YES PLZ! <333

[hailtheboyking]

<3 And Sam is glad there's at least someone out there that still cares. Since his brother always ends up arguing with him every time he DOES see him, he might have to go and confide in her every so often if Luce lets him >>; But she's like, the best mom/bigger sister that he always wanted.

Oh god XD He'd be so freaked out, it almost wouldn't be funny. Then again it's Sam so anything involving him and any intimacy is doomed to failure.

I SHALL DEFINITELY TRY :D
BTW, I saw all the shows you've seen and I am just going to say that I am SUPER jealous of you right now XD Do you have season tickets to the Gammage or something? Have you seen the lineup for the coming season? I am SO freaking excited for Beauty and the Beast and Les Mis, you have NO freaking idea. /random

[67metallicar]

I don't know why, but that just gives me the mental image of Charlie Brown!Samifer sitting at Lucy!Immy's psychiatry booth.

So either Lust would end up dying, or someone would interrupt the moment, much to Sam's relief. Either way, lulz could be had.

\o/
Oh, I wish I did. I spent a month in NYC in 2007 for a summer acting program and pretty much took advantage of the fact that I was there and saw as many shows as possible. And OMG the upcoming season's going to be so good!

[hailtheboyking]

That's...the best picture I can imagine XD Just him going out into the woods where she has it set up. Dear god, if people only knew on either side, that would be hilarious to learn about!

This needs to happen :D

You have no idea how jealous I am right now XD I did so many hours in my high school theater, but it wasn't until I got the job I'm at now before I was actually able to AFFORD tickets and go places, so man, I'm just catching up. AND I KNOW RIGHT? I'm pretty much applying for a promotion at my job JUST to support myself after all the tickets I'll buy XD (Well that and moving out but that's another story altogether :X) BUT YES AGREED <3

[67metallicar]

Except that no one would believe it if it got brought up, because LOLWUT? Why would that even happen?

XD Give me a time and day, because this needs to be logged like woah.

I will fully admit that the reason I find myself broke on a fairly regular basis is due to buying tickets. But OMG Hair! And Les Mis! And Beauty and the Beast! FFFF, awesome! ♥

[hailtheboyking]

That would never happen, of course. Which means it totally needs to happen!

If you're free this weekend, that'd be awesome :) [yay for Friday/Saturdays off!]

That's so going to be me this season with all the shows coming XD I've already tried to map it out between my move and my vacations. XD *dork*

[respect_the67]

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Hmmmmm I don't even know how to formulate this perfectness into words. I'm still just amazed that our Impalas were created with absolutely no co-planning, and yet they fit together so perfectly that anyone who sees them can definitely see how your Impala might have grown outward from mine after being turned human. I must admit that the Impala was pretty cautious about the idea of Human!Impala at first, but she definitely grew on her, and for the better, too. Every time those two have a thread, it's the highlight of my RP day, no joke. Especially that one time where we teamed up on Lucifer about making him leave with Sam's ipod. Disco music, lmfao forever. Though we forgot to mention that Hell also serves cold (not iced, just cold) coffee, and burnt hamburgers.

And ohhh Lust, running her over was fun. I'm looking forward to more snarking. ^_^

I just realized that is more like a fond story of our lives than a critical review... ah screw it, who really needs

[brainlessprince]

I love threading our Impalas! Really, it's the best thing ever and thank you for being so awesome to share a brain thread with! And FFFF, THAT THREAD, IT WAS AMAZING! And that the only alcohol in Hell is bad beer and wine that can be used to take off table varnish.

Lust doesn't want to be run over again. It was not a fun experience for her and she didn't appreciate how hard her mun was LOLing at her expense.

♥

Dancing Through Life or As Long As Your Mine? (Hey, you did say sing!)

[respect_the67]

I agree with all of that.

If she doesn't piss off the Impala again, she won't be. How d'you like being on the bad side of the Impala for once? ^_^

♥♥♥

No Good Deed. :C As Long As You're Mine is definitely second on the singing list though.

[brainlessprince]

Lust totally deserved it. Being on her bad side was infinitely weird. And kind of fun.

Oh noes, not the angst! (Mmmmh, sweet, sweet musical angst.)

[respect_the67]

It was weird for me too, I was thinking '...I'm snarking at one of my most favorite people ever. :C' Lol, is she really as difficult to deal with as I think she is when she's like that?

I knooooow, but the way Idina Menzel sings his name is so powerful and awesome it gets stuck in my head. *sigh* I want to see it in San Fran soooo badly.

[hurtswheni_play]

Don't worry about it, I like having snark-a-thons! And always. She's Lust. She either wants to stir up shit or have an orgy. Or do both.

Go see it! I've seen it three times, and every time it's amazing. Plus, I've heard so many good things about the SF cast.