Concrit Post 16

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[gusthemoose]

The Gang

team_x
a_soul_awake - Dr. Hope Chandler - X-Men OC
handyouredealt - Gambit - X-Men Origins (and a bit AU)

im_mortalis
brings_to_light - Ithuriel - Milton/Christian Mythology

No Comms, but Writing
lieu_murphy - Lt. Connie Murphy - The Dresden Files TV
manofclay - Lt. Col. Franklin Clay - The Losers
simplyguy - Yves/Guy Ardennes - Werewolf OC
soldier_ofgod - Castiel - Supernatural

[gusthemoose]

Always a good thing to consider.

Alive is definitely better than dead to Clay.

Well, we can at least plot things out to an extent. We don't actually have to play them out.

[kikibug13]

It really is. *might be indulging in Losers rather than X-men atm though, sigh*

Yes. We're taking it from there, and it's getting better. Honest.

Haha like that ever works out. Anyway, yes, we're poking at that... and, are we going to have earthquake+new land+new country announced, or something simpler (no, you don't have to answer, something to consider). Or is it going to be, hunting information, possibly working together with Stegler, going through Ukraine to take care of their stray sheep, and another case of 50 men with AKs, except, way more than 50?

[gusthemoose]

Losers is slowly consuming my life. You're not alone.

We should assault something soon, we know how twitchy Clay gets when he can't shoot things. *he's giving me the stink eye now.* I don't know what we're going to do about NJ. I suppose we could have Max seize a certain amount of territory and start that? Whatever, we'll shoot some guys first and work our way towards that.

[kikibug13]

Siiigh. (Well, that, and one of my scarier muses is out on the lose in my head, has been for days. Coug is one of the few who aren't bothered by him, for a certain value of not bothered.)

Again with -_- for (probably) having to sit an outing out. But yeah, when Aisha's mun is online, and hopefully other people...

... yeah, ooc plotting posts should happen.

[gusthemoose]

*pat pat* You're still loved.

I don't know, if he's just laying down cover fire then he probably can perch somewhere and snipe. It doesn't require too much physical effort. Again, Clay's giving me the stink eye.

Maybe today? Tomorrow?

[kikibug13]

Aww! *loves back*

... that is Cougar's bright and happy face, though? You know, wide smile, and for a moment you forget that he's scary? >.> (he does like being there for his boys.)

Right. *tries to round up brain from the plague and make a post*

[gusthemoose]

:D

They are all very attached to one another.

Aww. *sends chicken noodle soup through the internets for you*

[kikibug13]

They are, but then, when you keep people's asses out of deadly shit for a while, and they've been as a unit for how long? ... yeah, that happens.

Awww! Thank you :)

[gweakles]

You know my everlasting love for you and Hope. From what I've played with Gambit so far he seems on par despite whatever AU you're giving him. We'll play with him some more.

[gusthemoose]

I do know. And yeah, I should get Gambit out more. But like I said accents are hard to write! Not that I should let that be an excuse.

[gweakles]

Lol it's probably why I never play a character with an accent. I'm a lazy ass that way, so kudos to you! x3

[gusthemoose]

Me? I'm a moron.

[gweakles]

Nooooo you're not D:

[gusthemoose]

Just a little bit. Tiny bit.

[gweakles]

NO I SAY

*homnomnoms*