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Concrit Post 16

May 22, 2010 06:44

How's My Driving?
∞ Comment with all the journals you RP with (and the communities they're from).
∞ Reply to other people's comments (anon or logged in) with constructive criticism.
∞ Learn from the suggestions and profit!

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phonologic May 22 2010, 00:23:24 UTC

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phonologic • elegycity

purpion May 22 2010, 01:32:21 UTC

I really like seeing Uhura in play though I haven't seen her all that much. Her interactions with Spock are beautiful and the cannon personality is on the mark from the threads I've seen. Playing an investigator gives me joy to see the interactions and I would really like to see more between Spock and Uhrua. Getting him to the carnival was a lot of fun to watch too. Great personality, wonderful interaction and the voice is great too.

My only complaint is there isn't enough chances for other characters to really interact with her which is a bit on the sad side.

consorting May 22 2010, 05:00:07 UTC

Thank you for the feedback, especially for the canon and Spock/Uhura stuff! I'll have to relay this to Beth as well :D And I know I have been slacking with Uhura in Elegy. I will make a point to improve that with her.

passes_out May 22 2010, 06:05:01 UTC

Sure! I think you really have it together and it's a joy to read. Their personalities are so different but the chemistry is certainly there.

revivedqueen May 22 2010, 04:12:54 UTC

AS WE'VE ALREADY ESTABLISHED THE NEED FOR THE TROLLING OF SPOCK, I shall now focus my attention on Guinevere.

So I've only watched a couple of Merlin episodes, but I. Just. Totally love how you portray her. You manage to convey her softness without making her appear weak - and that post you did about her singing? That just totally pulled at my hearstrings, man oh man ♥

consorting May 22 2010, 05:06:33 UTC

YES PLZ.

You should watch more Merlin because it's amazing. :D I really worried about that with her and it's why I selected the canon point I did in early season 2. She's still kind and sweet but getting more certain of herself. I'm glad I've got that balance down. And I was super sad when I posted that song D: I'll have to be nice to poor Gwen once the Master plot is over with.

♥ Thank you~

zarahjoyce May 22 2010, 05:09:52 UTC

I know I really should sob.

...pfft, being nice to our characters is overrated anyway XD

consorting May 22 2010, 05:12:30 UTC

Her having to live with Arthur is already bad enough. I'm just patiently waiting for that angst to surface.

zarahjoyce May 22 2010, 05:17:33 UTC

...i will have to stalk this so. much. /is a bit of an a/g shipper :3

consorting May 22 2010, 05:19:35 UTC

\o/ Oh I love that ship, but this show makes it so easy to ship everyone with everyone else.

missnoface May 22 2010, 18:13:11 UTC

Your Spock is one of my favourites. Seriously. I need to stop being so lazy and have him interact with Bones a hell of a lot more. And from what I've seen of Gwen so far, she's spot on.

thanks for the notifs, lj :| sonofsarek May 25 2010, 04:38:45 UTC

Thank you! Likewise, and I'm sure I've said this before, but your Bones is one of my favorites as well. Thanks for the Gwen feedback, btw. I'm still working on her characterization and I just started playing her.

ROUND TWO! atalentedtongue May 27 2010, 05:02:20 UTC

I miss you. And them. They were really perfect for everything ever.

ICON = We did WHAT in the Officer's Lounge?!

♥

Re: ROUND TWO! phonologic May 27 2010, 05:27:29 UTC

What's the use of a HMD meme when you haven't tagged in nearly a year? Most of us never got the chance to know you. How are we supposed to know what you're like?

Re: ROUND TWO! atalentedtongue May 27 2010, 05:31:26 UTC

I didn't put up a comment for Uhura for that reason exactly. I was just saying that I loved playing when I did. I had cancer and was out of commission for months. When I was ready to come back, I was told that everyone had moved on and that the game was looking for a new Uhura.

I can't blame the game/mods/players. It happens. But I can still say I liked playing and the people that were there because I did.

Re: ROUND TWO! phonologic May 27 2010, 05:38:50 UTC

Then why comment now, unless you're consistently checking your flist? Are you ready to come back to playing, and looking for a reason to rejoin? There are far more people who miss you than you'd expect.

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