Concrit Post 16

[hmd_me]

How's My Driving?
∞ Comment with all the journals you RP with (and the communities they're from).
∞ Reply to other people's comments (anon or logged in) with constructive criticism.
∞ Learn from the suggestions and profit!

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[adorasion]

@ theskytides
♚ Grell Sutcliff | Kuroshitsuji | bloodychainsaw
♚ Yukiko Amagi | SMT: Persona 4 | adorasion
♚ Erika | Pokémon Special | petaldancing

@ Marina Asylum on IJ
♚ Elizabeth Middleford | Kuroshitsuji | dressup @ IJ
♚ Rin Kagamine | Vocaloid | singforever @ IJ
♚ Barry | Vassalord | incubusly @ IJ

@ wonderlandwars
♚ Elizabeth Middleford | Kuroshitsuji | lolitation

@ dear_mun
♚ Charles Phipps | Kuroshitsuji | acuate

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I think I am doing ok so far, but going to replay Persona 4/2nd walkthrough soon. And looking back at the Jack the Ripper Arc in Kuroshitsuji many times.

Anything would be nice. Everyone has a personal, anon-on, HMD in their profiles if you wish to post there (except Phipps)

[fracture]

HI CHRISSY.

[fracture]

actually, i have no concrit to give, i just wanted to say ily.

and that i need to join you over at tst eventually.

finish those icons for me.

[miraclefoo]

tyler finish your own icons and app ruby dammit

[fracture]

don't be mean to me uwahh i might not do it!! >:

[miraclefoo]

but but :

[miraclefoo]

I'll do your icons for a name change token 8)

[miraclefoo]

Uwah, thank youuuuuu ; 3;

[whatsthatmiria]

oh hey girl I was off on vacation and could not meme

You are indeed doing okay with Grell! I haven't seen enough of Yukiko or Erika to say. Your spelling/grammar has gotten a lot better, but the kind of mistakes you're making right now are more wrong words than misspelled words, so maybe proofreading would be a better idea.

also I'm curious about something. I think I asked you once before and it was one of those late night chat questions so idr the answer: do you think Grell is a guy or a girl? S/he's using feminine pronouns when you play him/her, but I've noticed you use he, him, and so on in narrative. I know it's canon-ish that Grell's trans-something but even though I read Black Butler every month I am confused as fuck about what's going on at all ever in it.

[adorasion]

sup Hilda